The nation should required all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I am agree with the stated issue that the nation should required all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. The curriculum which is engender for the student play a prominent role. Because on the curriculum the will get the knowledge as well as skills. So to set the study curriculum for student is the robust job, because on that study curriculum the futures of the students is depend.
The student should study the same curriculum until they enter the college, to maintain the uniformity and parity in to nation as well as it will become easy for government to perpetuate the grading system , mark evaluation system and to characterized each student according to its knowledge, skills. Because of same curriculum the student will get same knowledge who lives in village, town and pertinent to the student who lives in metropolis cities. And there will be no discrimination among every indigenous student and unprivileged student have scope for the development.
There is disadvantage also if the study curriculum is not maintain same through out the nation, for example, the student father or mother is in government service, during transfer of there job they kin has to mitigate from one state to other state, if curriculum is different in both the state the student will get regret otherwise the student he will not cope up with that curriculum in ephemeral period of time. On more example that, in India, in Maharashtra state, different curriculum are there like CBSE, National, SSC. CBSC is high level study as analogues to both, and the student get surfeit knowledge as well as more opportunity then SSC and National study curriculum and there for it will be unfair treatment with the student whose is studying SSC and national. For that reason the study curriculum should be ubiquitously same throughout nation.
In conclusion, same curriculum should be maintain ubiquitous the nation until they enter college to maintain uniformity in nation, and side by side they should modify the curriculum according to need and demand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73485646789 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.133187626 60.3974514979 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.25 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55664687929 0.243740707755 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24406157534 0.0831039109588 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202121281907 0.0758088955206 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404003297064 0.150359130593 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999481621209 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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