Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state
Laws are made to maintain the decorum and harmony of the state that is positively influencing for its beneficent. Every country constitute of its people and their sovereignty but it also include other natural elements like forest, wild animals, birds and natural resources whose conservation is as pivotal as of the humans. Therefore, I completely agree with the claim thus made by the prompt about implementation of laws for preserving the wilderness which is further detailed in the following paragraphs.
Nature and its entities are essential part of ecosystem, maintaining the flow and balance. Any breakage in the chain not only hampers the prevailing pattern but also misbalances the harmony. For example, in Nepal poaching of one horn rhinoceros is one of the major reasons for its massive decline in the past decade. The value the horn hold is impeccable in the illegal industry bringing massive fortune for the smugglers and the poachers. Understanding this fact about the value its holds, laws regarding strict conservation and protection of this wild animal in its natural hot and humid area is passed promoting sanctuary and establishment of national parks.
Furthermore, massive human intervention in the natural process has negatively impacted the flow of working. Those species which were at abundance few decades ago are already extinct or on the verge of it. Well understanding the consequence of anthropogenic activities, the suffering those animal bears is completely disgraceful and shameful. For example, emission of carbon through various sources had caused a massive rise in carbon dioxide content causing massive ice melting not only in the Himalayas but in the extreme polar. Alpine climate preferring animals such as snow leopard, polar bears, penguins, etc are the most vulnerable animals and birds because of this. They have equal right to be on this earth as of humans but what they are suffering is a chance of being extinct from this world in sooner time. For avoiding such a fate, many nations across the globe have passed laws for limiting their carbon emission. It might be a small step but the value it hold for those creatures is definitely unfathomable.
Moreover, deforestation is a primal cause of habitat loss and wildlife invasion. Laws regarding restriction of such act and if found guilty of doing so, extreme punishment should be effectively maintained. People fill their needs through nature but they have no right to destroy the home of others. Hence, because of such activities, news regarding animal invasion in human settlement is not uncommon news for now. It’s not their interference in human colony but ours in their home. Thus, laws for saving them and for restricting their destruction is must.
Lastly, for balancing the harmony of the nature; the one who provides us shelter and resilience, saving its integral part is equally important. We cannot imagine of tigers and elephants being extinct and continuing with the same cycle as it had before. Nature will suffer and will us. Formulation of laws for saving them for the sake of saving oneself is one of the only way through which efforts can be made. People are reluctant to understand its importance now but in long run for saving ourselves and our future these laws will prove to be a boon. Therefore, laws form each nation such as banning of poaching, deforestation and limiting carbon emission will can be a crucial invasion which not only protect the habitat and systems of wild but also contribute in bring the resilience of the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2977.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1063464837 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77373181848 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519725557461 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 944.1 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3173583155 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.321428571 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8214285714 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96428571429 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190429720152 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473892471613 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500398459182 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111074299164 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452176432379 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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