nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
protection of wild and wilderness has been a topic of debate since few years, owing to the excessive deforestation of trees and forests, which constitute the natural habitat of the wildlife. conservation of trees and animals not only helps in maintaining the balance cycle and food chain, but also an opens new avenues for for other sectors like tourism and trade . we humans have already sinned by destroying and polluting a major portion of our nature. it is time that, we take the situation on hand seriously and take necessarily preventive measures , and respond effectively in restoring our fauna.
Government has a crucial role in bringing about this change. nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state. laws enforcing prohibition of killing of animals for ivory, leather or for any other commercial uses should be immediately put into action. also, severe fines are to be charged on those indulged in smuggling of goods, drugs and other invaluable medicinal plants . Causing of loss of habitat not only effects the population of animal species but also their behavioral aspects and their modes of living.
nations should not leave any bit of opportunity in providing proper shelter to the wildlife, even at the cost of giving up on the land which could potentially be used for Information Technology development and economic gain. There are not many tigers, lions and other species of animals left in india. According to some statistics, the population of tigers has gone down from over to 10000 to barely above 300 in present india.This is very sad considering the fact that, india is the only country where Bengal tigers can be found. it is high time that we act fast and protect these endangered animals from becoming extinct.
In conclusion, the role of nations in the preservation of wilderness, and conservation of their habitat is pivotal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09265175719 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7616194924 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5342168875 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272956288357 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108454235496 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.252899879683 0.0758088955206 334% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164770974824 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147884789837 0.0667264976115 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.