Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
At a time so critical for environmental sustainability, the need to act is imperative. we are met with a myriad of detrimental issues that threaten to disrupt the natural balance of this world’s ecosystem. Problems like global warming, animal extinction and dwindling natural habitats all come down to the failure to adequately protect natural retreats. Thus, policies that advocate such preservation of the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state should be fully endorsed and encouraged, even if the economic gain from development of such areas is compromised.
One must question whether economic gain through development is really beneficial in the long, especially at the cost of a natural habitat. such a loss of natural diversity would be irrevocable. already we are faced with an alarming raise in the rate of deforestation with threatens climatic balance. Thus policies that protect the state of natural wilderness from such exploitation promise to cut the rate of unchecked loss should be made more common.
Additionally, one must fully understand the potential benefits that such preservation policies offer. By implementing such policies over designated areas, one creates natural preserves which open doors to many other industries that can be revamped to create economic benefits. To explain this notion, consider Africa, a natural retreat which protects the Savannah and its inhabitants whilst also generating a powerful tourist platform. thus, by sensitively designing policies, areas of wilderness can be protected while also providing an economic boost.
Lastly, the significance of natural preservation should never be overlooked. we have already seen the loss of many species in front of our eyes. Tasmanian tigers, Snow leopards and the Dodo bird have all been lost to this world. Now more than ever, the need to safeguard is vital. while economic gains can be compensated through other industries, preservation of whatever natural reserves we have left cannot be substituted.
In conclusion, it seems that preservation and economic gain are two sides of the same coin. The advantages of each pool can be reaped together through careful planning and execution of policies that favor conservation of habitats which can be used as economic magnets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, really, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54107648725 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02275713976 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2805210328 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.947368421 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317983843237 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928774689012 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105358401941 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178503349459 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760613109967 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.