Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position,

Wilderness can be defined as any region or ecosystem untouched by human development. Wilderness is slowly becoming a rare and precious resource. With the advent of technology and development, land untouched by humans is becoming rare, thereby causing a threat to the wildlife in its natural state. While many zoos and ecological parks are burgeoning, these are artificial developments and do not preserve the wildlife its pristine state. There is a stringent need for laws to harbour and protect this precious resource. The reasons why wildlife should be preserved in its original state is elucidated in the following passages.

First and foremost, wildlife preservation aids in maintaining the ecological balance. We are aware that human beings cannot function on their own. They are dependent on verdant regions like forests and wild animals for daily human needs. For example, we need wood for furniture, paper, etc. which comes in plethora from the trees in the forests. Such trees do not flourish well in the artificial man made environment. However, they spread out strong and tough branches in the natural environments of a forest. In yet another instance, we know how snakes and other reptiles help in maintaining ecological balance. They burrow the ground, eventually making it more fertile for further forest growth. Another example is that of the flora and fauna that grow in the wild. The ocean floor can also be regarded as kind of wilderness. Pearl oysters, various algae and different types of fish that grow and breed on the ocean floor find immense applications for human use. It is our duty to solicit these regions from adverse effects of chemical effluents and exhaust that we release from the industries to the land and water bodies. Such irresponsible acts lead to deprecation of wildlife and cause ecological imbalance.

Furthermore, History has been a witness to the fact that human activities have lead to mass extinction of many species. It is our duty to learn from our mistakes and protect the species on the verge of extinction. If we do not take heed to this fact, it will not be unsurprising that the animals like Elephants and Horses that we commonly see today will fall prey to extinction much like the Mammoth. Any species is a precious trove. Most of the species breed and flourish in their natural habitat. We should ensure that their habitats are not meddled with and they have a healthy environment to live.

In addition to the above points, we owe a healthy ecology to our future generations. We owe to them clean and pure air and plenty of resources which is only possible by protecting the wilderness in its natural state. When forests are protected and cared for, the air pollution levels gradually decrease. Forests and the wilderness harboured by such ecosystems house a plethora of natural resources like fossil fuels and minerals which will serve as an energy house for the generations to come. The posterity can benefit a lot if we take our wildlife preservation methods seriously and act upon them.

However, some people might state that preservation of wilderness in its natural state may hamper development. For instance, broad and wide roads can be developed in areas where there is presence of natural wilderness or industries, schools or parks could be developed in such regions. However, foregoing such interests is a small price to pay for a broader perspective. An industry can benefit a bunch of people but a clean environment benefits the world as a whole.

In conclusion, it should be our prime responsibility to preserve the natural wild habitat. Strict laws which must be made stringent in adherence must be implemented to achieve this goal. Only with such steps, we can achieve the quixotic ecological and environmental balance and gift our future generations a world that they deserve to live in.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3234.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 641.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04524180967 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0316973083 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78475727227 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482059282371 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1018.8 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7406222874 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1052631579 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8684210526 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149913938383 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375494079968 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423101259438 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895227792084 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339826600404 0.0667264976115 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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