No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
21st century has witnessed tremendous improvement in medicine, science, technology, engineering, etc and The knowledge in any field is too abundant that it can take ages for an individual to master a field almost every field has been on constant rise due to modern technologies, increase in people to work in their area of interest, etc. Some people and even the prompt claims that for any field to progress greatly, it should integrate information from areas that are outside of their
field of research. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt and argue that most of the fields today are interdependent and should rely on outside areas of study
to improve because of the following reasons.
To begin with, in modern days, almost every field has some part to play in areas outside their specialization and most of the subjects are interconnected. Even physicists like Stephen Hawking believe that the world can be explained in only one equation and that can be achieved only when separate areas of knowledge are incorporated together and examined. One of the wonders of 21st century is ability for man to go to space and explore moon and other planets. Mankind is able to go to space and send many machines to space to explore martian surface and other places is because they are able to borrow knowledge from physics, mathematics, mechanics, etc. Space travel, which was considered ridiculous once upon a time was possible because information and wisdom from several other fields are combined and utilized properly. Therefore, for some fields to achieve remarkable things, it should not be shy of borrowing data from extrinsic areas of study.
Furthermore, another invention of mankind that invented that has changed the way of earth is computers and mobile phones. The world has become faster and lives are made simpler because of invention of computers and smartphones. The inventions of smartphones was possible because of combined knowledge of electrical, electronic, computer science, and many other diverse fields. Once the mobile phones were invented, even unrelated fields like finance (stock market), business (online shopping),
retails, etc. were improved because of combining the working of the disparate fields even if they are unrelated. Now, with just mobile phone, anybody can know different things about diverse fields from law to journalism with just a click. If, humans were not able to invent all the above things by refusing to take part in other fields,
we would not be where we are
However, there are few fields where it does not need knowledge from other fields to progress and the knowledge in that particular field is enough for such subjects to progress. Such, areas, instead of taking help from other fields, provide help to diverse fields. One such area is mathematics. As the saying goes, "Mathematics is queen of science". Most of the progress made in mathematics is done by using its previous knowledge and experiences and wisdom. Mathematics is fundamental subject and is used
is most of the subjects like chemistry, physics, mechanics, etc. Therefore, there are few exceptions, where a field does not depend on external subjects.
In conclusion, it is highly important for persons in a field to look at different fields and try to unify them and without doing it, it would be onerous for humankind to achieve novel inventions and today's world faces many problems like environmental issues, limited resources, etc. If were to face the problems and survive, we should have a brief idea of other fields and specialists from different fields should work together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3039.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 592.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13344594595 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77190490254 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469594594595 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 950.4 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7151859235 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.625 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303453910649 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820000557723 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634230711793 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119001036515 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078701523242 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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