No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and
experience from outside that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Knowledge is the key for growth. It is true, that can't be any advancement in the a field until everyone puts forwards their expertise and evolve together by corporating together.
Firstly, all the fields are equally important in their sense. We can manage any resource with help of science and it is being used in every fields. For instance, the computer science helps the company grow by predicting the general requirements of finance. We can see the how science helps to manage the finance of the company by analyzing the old data about the company and many more which will help the company to predict and help them grow.
Secondly, fields like medical also need the help of the science. There many times when human hands can't reach the specialization or may be depth of the causes by various issue. But, this can be solved by the science. Recently, a program in abroad are testing to try use the robotics arms in the operation for the operating the delicate part like heart. Where the doctor's were not to reach the accuracy and the depth of that delicate organs.
Finally, all the fields plays an important role and for growth should have the idea about the other fields. When you master both subject you are able to solve practical problems. Fields like sports even they use the expertise of science. The science helps you to study about a person the data collected helps you the understand is top- notch performance before the match.
In conclusion the the knowledge and experience can help any field of study to grow and advance in that field. However, there also disadvantage in such fields like the military where we see the fighting as well as the use of grenades which welcomes chaos and destruction. When used in the right hand the correct use of the knowledge helps to make life easy.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...is the key for growth. It is true, that cant be any advancement in the a field until...
^^^^
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...s true, that cant be any advancement in the a field until everyone puts forwards thei...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ral requirements of finance. We can see the how science helps to manage the finance of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ence. There many times when human hands cant reach the specialization or may be dept...
^^^^
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t a person the data collected helps you the understand is top- notch performance before the ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nce before the match. In conclusion the the knowledge and experience can help any f...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nce before the match. In conclusion the the knowledge and experience can help any f...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s which welcomes chaos and destruction. When used in the right hand the correct use ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7246835443 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40478637646 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8658222981 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9444444444 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198393069152 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673546693014 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601713195745 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116453077174 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554831718868 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...is the key for growth. It is true, that cant be any advancement in the a field until...
^^^^
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...s true, that cant be any advancement in the a field until everyone puts forwards thei...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ral requirements of finance. We can see the how science helps to manage the finance of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ence. There many times when human hands cant reach the specialization or may be dept...
^^^^
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t a person the data collected helps you the understand is top- notch performance before the ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nce before the match. In conclusion the the knowledge and experience can help any f...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nce before the match. In conclusion the the knowledge and experience can help any f...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s which welcomes chaos and destruction. When used in the right hand the correct use ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7246835443 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40478637646 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8658222981 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9444444444 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198393069152 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673546693014 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601713195745 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116453077174 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554831718868 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.