"Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress."
Do we only make progress after making mistakes? Inasmuch as this might sound absurd but vast of the world greatest discoveries did not just come from a single trial. Yes! Several mistakes were made so as to make the progress of which we have today. Even some products after their discoveries do not relent. They keep coming up with several updates from various reviews. It is therefore imperative to know that only through mistakes can there be discoveries and improvements. The following Instances uphold the reasons for this.
firstly, mistakes beget discoveries and this fact is something prevalent in humans world. several instances have shown that humans made mistakes and with these mistakes they tend to learn from it and make bigger discovery. The first example is the "titanic" that sank. The Titanic was not perfected on first attempt even though the engineers proved it was in good shape and perfect conditions. After the catastrophe that came with the Titanic events, the designers and other researchers studied it and different inferences were made on what might have been the cause of this. From those inferences made, several gigantic ships, boats, cargo, and Aquatic vehicles were built. It can be seen that the great mistakes learnt from the Titanic was the reason to greater exploits in aquatic vehicles. Mistakes indeed are reflections of discoveries.
furthermore, the wright Brothers popularly Known for their discoveries of the Aeroplane when interviewed on the Big discovery in US in 1891 said the idea was not just perfected on a single trial. The younger brother claimed he had burnt down the family's poultry from one of his fatal mistakes - from using the wrong mixture of Fuel. Even after the wright brothers invention of the airplane, the world did not stop. other people came on and thought of the weight of the wright brothers plane as a barrier and improved on it, others modified on the fuel composition, and some increased the accommodation capacity without reducing the safety factor. It is very obvious that mistake is the mother of great inventions.
However, some might argue that some discoveries were at a glance, that is sacrosanct, but does that discovery remain like that? surely no. Many researchers would come for it, not because they do not value it but because from critical thinking comes greater discoveries. The Apollo modification is a good example of this. The law of relativity from Albert Einstein today, though seemed perfect on first postulation still receive great criticism, and some scientist flawed it on some unstated assumptions made by Albert Einstein. Moreover, This improvement talks can also be seen in Apple INC products - they improve from reviewers comments.
finally, It is crystal clear that mistakes are reasons for discoveries in human world. Mistake is not failure, it is only a sign that shows there can be room for improvement. An epigraph says "Practice makes perfection" and another says "Nobody is perfect", paradoxically, the two statements work hand in hand as one can never reach perfections but constant practice can get one close to perfection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, as to, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2657.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19960861057 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83831373103 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518590998043 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0599534503 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8928571429 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313508669573 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085927272669 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120007837614 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177903807629 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106422245894 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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