In order for any work of art for example a film a novel a poem or a song to have merit it must be understandable to most people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning f | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
In developing and supporting your position,
you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

I agree that any art work would have merit only when it is understandable by most people. The merit of an art is appraised by the number of
people that are able to understand the message in the art. Having said that, in contrast, there can also be scenarios where an art is not
understood by many but still holds merit.

First, various art forms like films, novels, songs etc are generally used as means to express or convey a message or a thought. Expressing
thoughts this way has a stronger impact than just preaching them to a group of people. But using art to spread a message can be tricky as
one should use precise tactics to rightly convey the message. There can be scenarios where the art is not able to convey the intended
meaning or somemtimes no meaning at all. If that is the case, then the very purpose of creating the art is not acheived. An art
can fulfil its incubency only when the message embedded in the art is comprehensible by the viewers. The value of an art can be appraised by the portion of
masses that understand the message embedded in it. Only when the art is appreciated by the people will its value increase and have substantial merit.

Second, art is sometimes created to generate money. For example, let us take the example of films. Avatar was released in India amidst a lot of fanfare.
Much to the movie buffs' delight, the film did very well thanks to its universal storyline and a strong message to save the natural resources on our
planet. It stands out to be the highest revenue generated for a Hollywood film in India. This would not have been possible if it was not understood by
both adults and the kids alike. On the other hand, there is another Indian move named "One". It fared very poorly at the box office for its
bland and incomprehensible story line. This is an epitome of how an art cannot generate good amount of revenue if it is not comprehensibe by the masses.

However, it is plausible that an art would have substantial merit even though it is not understood by most people. In this context, I would like
to cite the example of a movie, named "Interstellar". Despite its popularity amongst the academia, the film did not do well in the general public
as its story sounded arcane to them. The movie has been hailed for the ways it had shown near perfect depection of some of the scientific events
that was never witnessed by a human eye. Once such example from the movie is the way it had potrayed black holes. The pedagogs are so enthralled
by the view of the black hole in the movie that it looked just like the acutual black hole that was captured a couple of years later. Though
it might not have been understood by most people, this movie is still considered as one of masterpeices that we have produced.

Hence, I beleive that an art would have a merit only if it is understandable by most people because it is only when people understand the meaning
of the art will its' value be appreciated and at the same time, the art can generate a substantial amount of revenue. Sometimes, in contrast, the
art is said to have merit even if it is not fathomable by the masses because its meaning might not be deciperable by common people and only a few
erudite folks can understand it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onvey a message or a thought. Expressing thoughts this way has a stronger impact ...
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...art to spread a message can be tricky as one should use precise tactics to rightl...
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...e art is not able to convey the intended meaning or somemtimes no meaning at all....
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...creating the art is not acheived. An art can fulfil its incubency only when the m...
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...age to save the natural resources on our planet. It stands out to be the highest ...
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...ed very poorly at the box office for its bland and incomprehensible story line. T...
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...ademia, the film did not do well in the general public as its story sounded arcane to them. T...
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... it had shown near perfect depection of some of the scientific events that was never witne...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat was never witnessed by a human eye. Once such example from the movie is the way ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, still, then, well, for example, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2714.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 593.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57672849916 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68528766246 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426644182125 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 862.2 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9395948127 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5862068966 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4482758621 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06896551724 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200165344621 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607682567835 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549468012533 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066219433099 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513811406144 0.0667264976115 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, still, then, well, for example, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments