In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology, and other types of imaginative literature.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement asserts that every college student should study poetry, mythology, novels. The premises of that assertion is that having outside knowledge is essential to become well rounded individual. However, as per recommendation, i agree that, it is essential for college students to study materials outside of their field, but all college students should do so is too much extreme to comply with.
As, learning is a process, which needs continuous accumulation of knowledge, no one can say that, he has gathered the ultimate knowledge of all field, which is also impossible. To be well rounded individual, obviously it is necessary to gather knowledge form a vast field of sources like poetry, novel, mythology. For example, to be a perfect doctor, one needs knowledge of human physiology as well as psychology. Physiology helps the doctor to identify where and what is disease is, psychology helps to find out the attitude of the patient toward the disease. By having a sound knowledge of the both, a doctor can claim himself to be a well rounded practitioner.
On the contrary, the question is, whether it is necessary for all the individual to be a perfect or well rounded person? It is seriously a mistaken assumption that everyone should know everything. For instance, if everyone tries to gather more or less a certain amount of knowledge on every respect, then they will have some superficial knowledge in different subjects. As a result, there will be no one with any specialized knowledge in any field. So, without through knowledge on any specific side, who will bring that sector to the next level? If all NASA scientist have to learn poetry than they have to compensate in the field of astrophysics or scientific research. So, that is why, there must have provision for students to gain specialized knowledge, whereas, at the same time college should always open their doors for those, who want to learn the world outside of their academic field.
So, to conclude, it is essential to study novel, literature to be a perfect individual but should not be compulsory for every student so that one who want to gain specialized knowledge, can give more time on that field.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'more or less', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21875 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.146634615385 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0865384615385 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456730769231 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0288461538462 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122596153846 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.00961538461538 0.0406280797675 24% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.82957895548 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0480769230769 0.030933414821 155% => OK
Particles: 0.00240384615385 0.0016655270985 144% => OK
Determiners: 0.105769230769 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0288461538462 0.0249443105267 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2191.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98633879781 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371584699454 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29781420765 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210382513661 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153005464481 0.132149295362 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82957895548 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 51.9897969171 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.875 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3205491832 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9375 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.674092028746 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 52.656420765 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.58695652174 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303593248891 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145269745738 0.123202303941 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0669958587497 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536820227105 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17135765194 0.149214159877 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128788921136 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476725941994 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399694628565 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0306705243156 0.0692045440612 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20842168302 0.275328986314 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304476308632 0.0653680567796 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.