Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
According to the claim, there are a lot of problems, which can not be solved by laws and legal system. The premises of that claim is based on the reason that, laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds, which is certainly true according to my point of view and that is why I agree with the claim.
Laws are the set of rules, which dictates, how an individual should act and behave to a certain circumstances. Our behavior is largely influenced because of the limits set by the law. That is why, problems of a society can be eradicated in a great extant, by enforcing strict laws and legal system. However, it is not wise to hope that, all the problems will be solved if we enforce laws respective to a problem. Actually, we humans, by nature, enjoy leniency and loves to be freed from all obligations. Sometimes, there are situations, which can be solved through our humanity attitude towards the problem. If a person is forced to love his country, it will be a futile effort to make him work for the country if he does not feels that way by himself. Patriotism can not be built up by force or law, if the person does not feels for his country, similarly, that idea applies to other aspects of our life.
Laws can make people aware of their act and inform about the consequence of violating it. But can it really make us bound to follow it? For example, a certain state declares that, if a person smokes in public place, he will be fined $500. But it is logical to assume that, after announcing that law, there will be no smoking in public place? Certainly, most of the people will start to avoid smoking in public place but at the same time, there will be some people, no matter what, will break the law. So, it is the matter of choice for some, either to follow the custom or to break it. So, to make people restrain from doing something, it is essential to make them aware of the consequences by inciting awareness rather than imposing something to follow. If the nation can successfully raise awareness, convince them to distinguish the right from wrong, then it would make the situation much better and leads toward the solution more easily.
So, to conclude, it is needless to say, as most of the problems can be solved by legal system, we can not deny the impact of a law in solving social problems, but at the same time, relying on laws and hope that it would solve all the problems, would not be a good idea as there are many more people, who loves to break it and therefore make the situation worse.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'feel'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: feel
...him work for the country if he does not feels that way by himself. Patriotism can not...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...him work for the country if he does not feels that way by himself. Patriotism can not...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 825, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...by force or law, if the person does not feels for his country, similarly, that idea a...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.189393939394 0.240241500013 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.174242424242 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0530303030303 0.0880659088768 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511363636364 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0587121212121 0.0444667217837 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119318181818 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0397727272727 0.0406280797675 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39095184032 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0397727272727 0.030933414821 129% => OK
Particles: 0.00189393939394 0.0016655270985 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.092803030303 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0397727272727 0.0249443105267 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189393939394 0.0148568991511 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2526.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 466.0 452.878318584 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42060085837 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285407725322 0.366273622748 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.18025751073 0.280924506359 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122317596567 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0751072961373 0.132149295362 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39095184032 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474248927039 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 53.6164561637 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5263157895 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.112135871 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.947368421 141.124799967 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5263157895 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 42.5520668624 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.22666666667 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461213900734 0.391690518653 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.176114421855 0.123202303941 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115927710046 0.077325440228 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514976822004 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181251003227 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18399110777 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107850901184 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.474197057695 0.385218514788 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0219057556591 0.0692045440612 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36545332142 0.275328986314 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102214594041 0.0653680567796 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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