Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
I agree that, corporation should focus the social and environmental problems and promote well being of the societies in which they operate.
Corporations operating in a environment are doing business using the resource of that society and environment and that is why it becomes a moral obligation for them to return something beneficial to that society. Under that corporate social responsibility, corporations should promote the well being of the society, act that would substantiate the social growth, identify social problems and provide as much solution as possible. As the people of the society are the customer and thus the driving force of a corporation, that is why ensuring better condition for those people, will also ensure a better strategic position for operating business in that area. Well being of the society strengthen the position of the organization both from the business strategy and moral point of view.
On the other hand, if the corporations only focus on profit, and thus make as much money as possible, initially that may seem more realistic and beneficial for their growth, as long as they are not violating any law. But the problem is that, in the long run, that type of attitude acts as a curse for the future development. Corporations focusing on only profit oriented schemes, at one time become glutton, and thus the people of the region where they are operating, feel anathema for them. Obviously, those who focuses on their the social responsibilities and environment related problems would get an edge over those corporations who do not. In today's competitive market, customers are more conscious about their right and that is why, when someone focuses on their problems will get an advantages.
So, to conclude, it is evident that, corporations should focus on the problems like social and environment problems, at least to the areas where they are operating, as it their responsibility to return some in back from where they are gleaning their profit. To operate only by law and thus ignoring those problems would make them suffer in the long run as people are being more and more conscious day by day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y operate. Corporations operating in a environment are doing business using th...
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Line 5, column 788, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advantage' or simply 'advantages'?
Suggestion: an advantage; advantages
...eone focuses on their problems will get an advantages. So, to conclude, it is evident that...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'at least', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215938303342 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.149100257069 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0848329048843 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462724935733 0.0497285424764 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0462724935733 0.0444667217837 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133676092545 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0437017994859 0.0406280797675 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83467362726 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154241645244 0.030933414821 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120822622108 0.0997080785238 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231362467866 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0308483290488 0.0148568991511 208% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2145.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 354.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0593220339 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330508474576 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265536723164 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206214689266 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127118644068 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83467362726 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 49.095328721 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 29.5 23.380412469 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8413096994 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.75 141.124799967 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 23.380412469 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 56.0536723164 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.62765957447 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549729340058 0.391690518653 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15489401217 0.123202303941 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620457370921 0.077325440228 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64283308284 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153450194589 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267054531038 0.161403998019 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100917632038 0.0892212321368 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.466091221134 0.385218514788 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00853012531388 0.0692045440612 12% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40450416236 0.275328986314 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533707082007 0.0653680567796 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.