Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your own position, you should address both of the views presented.
It is thought that corporations’ only responsibility is to make as much money as possible, while others believe that corporations should take responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. The latter option proves most beneficial to a company’s success and growth. Not caring about the society or environment in which the corporation operates can have detrimental effects on the prosperity of the corporation. Money should not be the driving factor of a corporation's success or failure.
If corporations do not care about the society around them, it can be disadvantageous to the supplier and the consumer. When companies do not care about their customers, the customers are less likely to return, which results in a loss of profit. When the customers do not return, they lose the convenience or service offered by the company. It is a lose-lose situation. If corporations care about making money at all, they will consider caring for the society and customers around them.
Caring for the environment surrounding a corporation is also very important. For example, big corporations and factories emit prodigious amounts of pollution each day, which accumulate over time. This pollution has harmful effects on the environment, which costs the government, and sometimes the individual corporations, money to clean it up. A clean environment is vital to not only the corporation's success, but installing eco-friendly strategies has planet-wide benefits.
It can be disputed that making as much money as possible, in a corporation setting, is a key component in the success of the company. In a sense, this is not false, but focusing strictly on profit, and nothing more can result in a failing corporation. Money does not equal success, and money sure does not equal happiness.
In conclusion, the responsibilities of big corporations and companies are not only making money, but also caring for the societies and environments around them. Having a stable environment and society are the fundamental aspects to a corporation’s success. If there are no customers, communities, or environmental strategies to keep the surrounding area free from pollution, then corporations may be doomed to failure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 516, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...y should not be the driving factor of a corporations success or failure. If corporations ...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding society'?
Suggestion: the surrounding society
...e. If corporations do not care about the society around them, it can be disadvantageous to the suppl...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...an environment is vital to not only the corporations success, but installing eco-friendly st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4447592068 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42225108931 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470254957507 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5617005101 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.157894737 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309684746832 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947607493952 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118374239147 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177562090515 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131655510657 0.0667264976115 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.