People are too quick to take action: instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do
Life is a sequence of uncountable events in which we have to make decisions in each and every mode of our life- whether big or small. However, to make a decision in a right way is not easy as we think it is. Since, a small decision could change our entire life in an unpredictable way, we should be very cautious in making any decision. I therefore personally agree with the prompt that we should always be aware about the possible future consequences of a decision we make in the present for the following reasons.
Decision making process is always imperative in one’s life and one should always be very careful about the possible future consequences while making decisions. Usually a hasty decision made in aggression, depression, or in obligation of external forces could lead to chronic effects in one’s life, family, society and, probably to a whole nation as well. For instance, teenagers usually fall in the whim of their friends and usually do several crimes without any forethought about the future consequences and becomes the victim of drug addiction, fighting, robbery, rape, prostitution, murder and other several crimes, the consequence of which often ruin their entire life. If such people had thought about the future consequences of their action, they would not have fallen into the trap of momentary enjoyment and entertainment and could have made their life better. Thus, one should always be circumspect while making decision.
It is evident from the history that people usually make impromptu decision while one feels danger or become aggressive. Such hasty decision had always led to severe consequences, usually causing a catastrophic effect in the lives and property of human being. For instance, consider the consequence of atomic bomb blasting in Hiroshima and Nagasaki of Japan by American troops during world war second. No one could imagine the affliction and misery faced by the victims of such bombing, and no amount of remorse could heal the affliction, misery, and hardships faced by those Japanese people who became the victim of such bombing. If the nations during world war had abandoned their arrogance and had made some judicious compromises on general consensus for the sake of people, it would not have had such devastating worldwide effect. Thus, one should not be hasty in making decision, and should always take time to think about the future consequences of the action.
A thoughtful decision is always in favor of human well-beings and the prosperity of the nation. If a person thinks properly before taking any action, such action is always beneficial to general people. For instance, consider the well-thought decision made by Mother Teresa in devoting her entire life for human well-being. She has established number of international social organizations like missionaries of charity in about 140 countries which have served thousands of old-aged people, orphans, mentally retired people, sick, poor people, and helpless people from its establishments. She has devoted her entire life in serving all these needy and helpless people. And because of her magnanimous work, she was also rewarded with Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.Thus, a thoughtful decision making is always beneficial to the entire human being, and so one should always contemplate about the future consequences regarding the possible effects of current decision one is going to make
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g or small. However, to make a decision in a right way is not easy as we think it is. Since, a...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unpredictable way" with adverb for "unpredictable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...l decision could change our entire life in an unpredictable way, we should be very cautious in making a...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
... had made some judicious compromises on general consensus for the sake of people, it would not ha...
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Line 4, column 756, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...rewarded with Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.Thus, a thoughtful decision making is always...
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Line 4, column 839, Rule ID: AND_SO_ONE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'and so on' (="etc.")?
Suggestion: and so on
...s beneficial to the entire human being, and so one should always contemplate about the fut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2852.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 549.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19489981785 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77525460967 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486338797814 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 912.6 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.815207765 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.80952381 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130010889408 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458135073109 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540299882227 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848965597548 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236650114682 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.