as people rely more and more on technology to solve the problem, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
The author of the topic states as people rely more and more on technology to solve the problem, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. While some may argue that this statement holds true all the time, others may counter that claim by providing examples in support of their claim. In my essay, I will highlight both sides of the argument, and also provide sound reasoning for my claim.
In today's world, every single thing that we want is just one click of a button away. Food clothes, transport, electronics, you name it. But this could not be possible if the technologies that we have are not in existence. So technology plays a vital role in daily life, without it one could barely imagine one's life. Humans life have been changed so dramatically. It can be easily seen from our daily life that how technology revolutionized our life. From going to office by car to the usage of elevators instead of stairs. You can easily reach out to your family and friends when you are not at home.
The assumption that the ability of humans to think about themselves will surely deteriorate might not hold true because if look back at the introduction, one could argue that how one should travel to the office without a car or by any other vehicle. How one would complete his work without a computer or connect with one's family. Yes, we have an alternative for all these mentions above, but my question is, are they as productive as technologies make things productive in terms of output. Answer is no, because in today world if you are trying to connect with someone with the help of methods that were used early, then it makes no sense as we are living in the century where you can connect with anybody at any corner of world within few seconds, you don't have to wait for days in sending your message to them.
However everything has bad side technology too has a bad side, because nowadays humans are completely dependent on technology for most of the work they do. From switching off the fan with remote to do a basic calculation with the help of a calculator. Technology not only tackles with the problems that we face but also create some problem, for example, as mentioned in the first paragraph that we are using a car for going to the office but this also leads to the global warming. And we are still trying to figure out the solution to this problem.
So ya every coin has two faces, technology has too. But as compared to the bad sides of technology, we have a much more positive side. Technology frees the human to think, not only think but also providing the platform to implement them. For example, we are using Facebook but was it possible to develop or use Facebook without the internet. And if you want to retrieve any information or data, you can easily search it on any search engine which you like to use. So we can say technology has obsolete problems.
In the end, we can say that technology is the medicine for the problem that we were facing earlier. Though it has created some problems for us, however, it also teaches us how to tackle them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ssible if the technologies that we have are not in existence. So technology plays a...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...fe, without it one could barely imagine ones life. Humans life have been changed so ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...work without a computer or connect with ones family. Yes, we have an alternative for...
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Line 8, column 754, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...corner of world within few seconds, you dont have to wait for days in sending your m...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...in sending your message to them. However everything has bad side technology too ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59677419355 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45863310315 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1188668095 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40740740741 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28279698123 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761037263107 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144962707482 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156227170946 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111526429929 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.