As people rely more and more on technology to solve problem, the ability of humans to thing about themselve will surely deteriorates.
In today's world, every single thing that we want is just one click of a button away. Food clothes, transport, electronics, you name it. So technology plays a vital role in daily life, without it one could barely imagine one's life. It makes possible most of the work we do in our daily life from driving a car to using elevators, etc.
Technology makes the world a smaller place by connecting people through various platforms, for example, we can travel to any place or country which we want to travel. Can make friends from different ethnicity, possible because of the platform like Facebook. It helps humans to think out of the box, make new discoveries, inventions so that our life became easier and comfortable. For example, if we want to retrieve any information about anything we have to just type it on google and we will get the result, in these new inventions and technology helps us in making think easy.
Nowadays we can even switch on or off fan or light with the help of remote, there is no need to get up and switch off the button. You can order your food, book the table in a particular restaurant, even you can do shopping without going to the shop or mall, all this is possible because of various food delivery app and e-commerce websites are available to us. Technology improves the productivity of humans by reducing their efforts in doing anything. Though technology has various positive side however it has a negative side too that impacts the human because we are getting more and more dependent on it. From doing a basic calculation using the calculator to misusing it by mimic of face any person on porn site or any other website.
In the end, we can say that there is always a bad side of everything and technology has it too, but as compared to the bad side we have many reasons to use various technologies in our daily life as it won't affect the ability of humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...fe, without it one could barely imagine ones life. It makes possible most of the wor...
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Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m driving a car to using elevators, etc. Technology makes the world a smaller pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57184750733 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55197685943 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2228959848 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115266392439 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398801209163 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500490348971 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660636895923 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225623661019 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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