As people rely more and more on technology to solve problem, the ability of humans to thing bout themselve will surely deteriorates.
In today's world every single thing that we want is just one click of a button away. Food clothes, transport,electronics,you name it.So technology plays vital role in daily life, without it one could barely imagine one's life. It makes possible most of the work we do in our daily life from driving car to using elevators,etc.
Technology makes the world smaller place by connecting people through various platforms for example we can travel to any place or country which we want to travel, can make friends from different ethnicity,possible because of the platform like facebook. It help humans to think out of the box, make new discoveries, inventions so that our life became more easier and comfortable. For example if we want to retrieve any information about any thing we have to just type it on google and we will get the result, in this new invension and technology helps us in making think easy.
Now a days we can even switch on or off fan or light with the help of remote, there is no need of get up and switch off the button. You can order your food, book your table on a particular restaurant, even you can do shopping without going to the shop or mall, all this is possible because of various food delivery app and e-commerce websites are available to us. Technology improves the productivity of humans by reducing their efforts in doing anything. Though technology have various positive side but we can not say it does not have negative impact on human because we are getting more and more rely on it. From doing basic calculation using calculator to misusing it by mimic of face any person on porn site or any other website.
In the end we can say that there is always a bad side of everything and technology has it too, but as compared to bad side we have many reasons to use various technologies in our daily life as it won't affect the ability of humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , electronics
...f a button away. Food clothes, transport,electronics,you name it.So technology plays vital r...
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Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...thes, transport,electronics,you name it.So technology plays vital role in daily li...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...fe, without it one could barely imagine ones life. It makes possible most of the wor...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...life from driving car to using elevators,etc. Technology makes the world smalle...
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Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from driving car to using elevators,etc. Technology makes the world smaller place...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , possible
...an make friends from different ethnicity,possible because of the platform like facebook. ...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...cause of the platform like facebook. It help humans to think out of the box, make ne...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ies, inventions so that our life became more easier and comfortable. For example if we want...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... want to retrieve any information about any thing we have to just type it on google and w...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ology helps us in making think easy. Now a days we can even switch on or off fan or lig...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...y helps us in making think easy. Now a days we can even switch on or off fan or lig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59226190476 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79291492805 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9991939426 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127752193178 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519057811732 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561149336452 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750740559268 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286467635208 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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