As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

In today's world, each and every person whether he/she is an infant, young or old is using technology in his/her daily life. Technology has become an indispensable part of society. Technology constantly motivates a person to think and bring out something new to the world. So I believe that technology not only helps to solve our daily problems but also inspires us to think about something innovative and make it real using this technology, thereby capability of humans' thinking will not be greatly affected.

Nowadays, when we see in the market, the advancement of technology has reached its peak, and this technology is making our life easy. The software industry is totally dependent on logical thinking and applies that logic to make some innovative product which can ease the human life. So, by all means, it is technology that constantly motivates software engineers to think profoundly which leads to numerous friendly applications which we use in our daily life. For example, Whatsapp is an application which is used today worldwide for chatting. This application has become the paradigm of the today's technology and this is purely engendered owing to human thinking. Moreover, today's children are also proving their themselves prodigy by thinking and making the use of technology. These prodigies are fascinated by technology and they are trying to make something new so definitely, they have to think a lot.

Besides, not only in the software field but in every field, technology makes human think. For instance, aerospace engineers think a lot each and every day about different facts of space and how will they manage to go in space and regarding aircraft. So, they also use technology to make some crucial decisions.

On the other hand, I also believe that to some extent, technology has affected the power of the human brain in one way or other negatively. Because, today, we have become totally dependent on the calculator for doing even small calculations.

All in all, I would say, when I see the broad picture, I feel that technology has made us think a lot from last few years and it continuously helping us to think about innovative ideas.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...lication has become the paradigm of the todays technology and this is purely engendere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, i feel, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7577947891 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502777777778 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.148428797 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162695213299 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594592716246 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284017534379 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898777333456 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034619620642 0.0667264976115 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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