As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Technology has brought a new era in our daily life. To keep pace with modern life, we can not think without technology. So, people are getting more and more reliable on technology day by day. I am disagree with the claimed issues.
In our everyday life , we are totally dependant on technology. As example , in office people use computer. Computer is very high efficient device and it is solving their official works with very less time.So people can solve their problem by more efficiently. It enhance their creativity.
Living with good health is another important things for happy life. Life becomes easy and comfortable with using technology. As example, technology saves times at home , so people has enough time for themselves. So, people can do exercise, reading or can do their favorite hobbies which keeps their mind fresh and happy.
Technology is making people more creative. As example, in research with the help of earlier data scientists are making another advanced research ,which is really appreciable.
So, we can say that as people are relying on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will not surely deteriorate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reliable on technology day by day. I am disagree with the claimed issues. In our ever...
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...ally dependant on technology. As example , in office people use computer. Compute...
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...echnology. As example , in office people use computer. Computer is very high effi...
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.... Computer is very high efficient device and it is solving their official works ...
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...eir official works with very less time.So people can solve their problem by more ...
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...sts are making another advanced research ,which is really appreciable. So, we c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 2235.4752809 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 442.535393258 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15104166667 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67317240133 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 704.065955056 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9373285621 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9333333333 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305566244452 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991184589234 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135027098117 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197444894116 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145576431413 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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