Argument 49
In a study of reading habits of Leeville citizens conducted by the University of Leeville, most respondents said they preferred literary classics as reading material. However, a follow-up study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in Leeville was the mystery novel. Therefore, it can be concluded that the respondents in the first study had misrepresented their reading habits.
University of Leeville studied of reading habits of Leeville citizens and found that most respondents are preferred by classical reading material.However after another follow up studied by same researcher ,they recommends that respondents in the fast study had misrepresented their reading habits.To support that claim author mentioned that from the follow o studies they found that the most books checked by frequently is mystery novel.
Firstly, author mentioned that due to different reading habits with respect to the follow up studies we can conclude that first study is misrepresented.Here author have not clarify the reason behind misrepresentation.It might be happen that the sample data collected from the place where most of the people are preferred by reading material as classical books.Here author have not mentioned the actual number of citizens of people between whom the research is conducted.It might be happen that the number of the citizen is less where the sample data is collected.
Moreover, author said that by follow up studies take by same researcher they found the book most frequently checked by the public library is mystery novel.From that statement we can assume that the most of the people of Leeville preferred by mystery novel books.As it might be happen that there are many private libraries in Leeville where majority people the book most preferred is reading material books as classical.Here author have not mentioned proper actual statistics of the Leeville people.
Finally to support author recommendation we need to know actual statistics of the Leeville people .Moreover If other libraries are present in Leeville then that documentation is also necessary to judge the author recommendation.It might be happen that the statics collected in first time is between less number of people and the data collected from follow up studies is also not significant number of people of Leeville. It might be happen that the research have not collected from majority of the people of leeville. It might be happen that the majority of the people of the leeville have different reading material which is far from classical and mystery novel.
We can preclude that without actual statistics we can not support the author recommendation at most level.After clarification the above doubt we can decisions to support that recommendations.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1963 1500
No. of Different Words: 130 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.125 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.744 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 47.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.038 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.556 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.836 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.378 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...preferred by classical reading material.However after another follow up studied by same...
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Suggestion: However,
...preferred by classical reading material.However after another follow up studied by same...
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...her follow up studied by same researcher ,they recommends that respondents in the ...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
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Suggestion: recommend
...low up studied by same researcher ,they recommends that respondents in the fast study had ...
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Suggestion: To
...had misrepresented their reading habits.To support that claim author mentioned tha...
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...t that claim author mentioned that from the follow o studies they found that the most book...
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...ifferent reading habits with respect to the follow up studies we can conclude that first s...
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...lude that first study is misrepresented.Here author have not clarify the reason behi...
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Suggestion: clarified
... is misrepresented.Here author have not clarify the reason behind misrepresentation.It ...
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...ify the reason behind misrepresentation.It might be happen that the sample data co...
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... by reading material as classical books.Here author have not mentioned the actual nu...
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... between whom the research is conducted.It might be happen that the number of the ...
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... by the public library is mystery novel.From that statement we can assume that the ...
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...mystery novel.From that statement we can assume that the most of the people of Le...
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Suggestion: As
...eville preferred by mystery novel books.As it might be happen that there are many ...
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... is reading material books as classical.Here author have not mentioned proper actual...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...statistics of the Leeville people. Finally to support author recommendation we nee...
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...actual statistics of the Leeville people .Moreover If other libraries are present ...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...tual statistics of the Leeville people .Moreover If other libraries are present in Leevi...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...tual statistics of the Leeville people .Moreover If other libraries are present in Leevi...
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...sary to judge the author recommendation.It might be happen that the statics collec...
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...rom majority of the people of leeville. It might be happen that the majority of th...
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...e majority of the people of the leeville have different reading material which is...
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Suggestion: After
...the author recommendation at most level.After clarification the above doubt we can de...
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Line 17, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the author recommendation at most level.After clarification the above doubt we can de...
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Line 17, column 150, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'decision'
Suggestion: decision
...er clarification the above doubt we can decisions to support that recommendations. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 13.6137724551 176% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 372.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44892473118 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04138007716 2.78398813304 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.362903225806 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.238069059 57.8364921388 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.571428571 119.503703932 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.1428571429 23.324526521 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 5.70786347227 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.25449101796 495% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319853008459 0.218282227539 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172922286596 0.0743258471296 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165133983955 0.0701772020484 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216065537898 0.128457276422 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178373790374 0.0628817314937 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 14.3799401198 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 48.3550499002 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.197005988 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.5979740519 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 12.3882235529 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.9071856287 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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