In a study of reading habits of Leeville citizens conducted by the University of Leeville, most respondents said they preferred literary classics as reading material. However, a follow-up study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in Leeville was the mystery novel. Therefore, it can be concluded that the respondents in the first study had misrepresented their reading habits.
The author of the analytical piece has reached to an optimistic conclusion just depending on a small number of set of facts.On the argument given about about the study of reading habits of the leeville citizens conducted by the university of the leeville .I will be giving a number of instances where the author might have misinterpreted the stats provided to him/her or that might be caused by the outside influence in favoring for the mystery novels rather than the literary novels.
In the first instance author has supported his/her argument by writing that most respondents of the city, leeville preferred literary classics as the reading material.In that case ,their might be a fact that those who have been part of the interview might have preferred literary classics than any other novel. The interview might be taken for a small number of the citizens of the city leeville . There also might be some outside influence working favoring the literary classics or the ones interviewed have taken a bribe for saying as literary classic as their proffered novel.
The author should analyze more number of citizens so that he/she gets an accurate results.The author’s interview should be a diverse one.By diverse i mean that the interview should be reached to all the classes of the society .There should be influence of all the different age groups .No biasing should be allowed while taking the interview.
On the second instance the author gets to the favor of the mystery novel,he/she writes that a follow up study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in leeville was the mystery novel.I would argue on this as ,there might be a case where researchers have not gone through all the libraries of city leeville .There are more than 2 components of the libraries such as the government and the private ones .When the researchers found out that mystery novels are frequently checked out ,there might also be a case that at that point of time more mystery novel were introduced to the market so there was frequent check of the mystery novels. Also a low number of literary classics were introduced to the market so that there was an less number of literary classics checked out.
Now comes the case of the statistical integrity how many number of citizens lived at a particular moment in the city leeville?Also cases regarding the author of the literary classes comes to the act . Demand and supply of the mystery novels compared to the literary classics. More the demand more the supply of the novels . Then the major fact that should take place is that how much is the keen readership of mystery novel coma red to the literary classics.The difficulty level also come into the act.There can be a case where mystery novels are easy to understand and literary classics are harder to understand .
Also the ratings provided to the authors and the novels are also a part of the research.
The author has reached to the conclusion that respondents in the first study has misinterpreted their reading habits .So the author should visit through the city to gather more number of facts and also gather more information to support his/her facts .And then he/she should reach to the conclusion ,favoring one novel to the other novel.Also the length of time between both studies be mentioned in the argument .
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Essay evaluation report
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Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
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Final score: 3.0 out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, while, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 55.5748502994 146% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2821.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 575.0 441.139720559 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90608695652 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6048494745 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 204.123752495 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.384347826087 0.468620217663 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.0 705.55239521 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.8473053892 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.03949604 57.8364921388 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.0 119.503703932 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.2307692308 23.324526521 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.70786347227 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.25449101796 952% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197493089344 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741034558254 0.0743258471296 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548019118945 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955948515062 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604568298699 0.0628817314937 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 14.3799401198 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 12.3882235529 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.1389221557 176% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.9071856287 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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