"As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate."
Today’s world consists of technologies which helps to complete a task very easily in a short period of time. With the help of artificial intelligence and human made machines, humans achieved a great successful in the technology advancement.
It is said that a coin has two side, one is positive side and other is negative side. Technology as well has the two side. Humans became so capable that they can do a piece of work in micro-seconds with the help of technologies. At the same time technologies has made people more dependent on them. It has affected their life greatly. Even for a simple calculation we use calculators to calculate. We became so sluggish that without thinking use our developed technologies to get our task done.
It is true that ability of humans to think is deteriorating day by day but at the same time they are developing advanced technologies which saves the precious time for task completion. For example, consider an e-based Biometric system. With the help of this they can get authentication for any official or non-official institute from any corner of the world. Without this it would had been much harder as people has to roam here and there to get it done.
In order to save time and to accomplish the task as soon as possible, people use more technologies. It has made an easy life for us to deal with the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Today's world consists of technologies which helps to complete a t...
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... complete a task very easily in a short period of time. With the help of artificial intellige...
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...a short period of time. With the help of artificial intelligence and human made m...
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... of this they can get authentication for any official or non-official institute f...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ner of the world. Without this it would had been much harder as people has to roam ...
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...t it done. In order to save time and to accomplish the task as soon as possible,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74261603376 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93391277725 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6984926494 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9333333333 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184304399005 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601201174856 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470068832995 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114884303112 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207921188187 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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