As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement claims that the reliance on technology will impair the critical thinking of humans. It is known that the advent of the Internet and many others technological devices have improved our daily lives in many aspects such as availability of information, quickness to realize things and tasks beyond the easiness to solve house and business works. Nevertheless, stating that these changes over the time will reduce the ability of humans to think by themselves is not reasonable. Personally, I disagree with the statement since I believe that all advances in technology are positive and enhance our critical thinking rather than impair it.
Technological advances are not just those we know these days, innovative creations occur since the beginning of civilization when there were a lot of improvements in technology, for example, the discovery of the fire, the invention of the wheel, the use of the iron and so on. If those advances were able to preclude human creativity the humanity surely would not be in such advance stand as today. Neither of these advances impaired human ability to think by themselves nor learn and develop more and more, on the contrary, with each advance humans are boosted to overcome in order to keep updated. Civilizations or reigns in the past could not just observe another one discovery of the enemies, they should wisely think to stay prepared at the same level or they would be conquered or invaded.
Furthermore, technology not only stimulate creativity and ability to tackle the problems, but generate necessity to keep abreast of novelties, since technological advances keep happening all the time and we should think and learn about it or we will be obsolete and outdated. For instance, in business almost every year occurs upgrade of systems used and if employees do not learn about it they will be in danger to lose their jobs. Another example, in medical field doctors and researchers can not stay accommodated with the current treatments and drugs because other diseases, virus and bacteria appear and they should be prepared to solve these difficulties discovering new treatments and solutions through critical thinking.
Finally, all the improvements in technologies are made by humans, therefore, it enhances our knowledge in these matters not diminish our capacity to think. Although just few people know how to develop new devices and technologies the rest should know how to use them in order to facilitate and improve their daily lives. Hence, our ability to think by ourselves is continuing to grow in more ingenious and complex aspects.
To sum up, staying updated with all new devices and sources of technologies require us a lot of effort to learn how to use it well not impairing our critical thinking at all. Humanity will be continuously moving forward and technology would provide new outlooks for our knowledge and thinking.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2426.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1289640592 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80497182308 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501057082452 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7026402454 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.625 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5625 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219216458806 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810659075593 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489535166826 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124905608396 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032133392222 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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