According to the given statement that people will loose the ability to think for themselves as they rely more and more on technology to solve problems, I disagree with the statement to great extent. To support my argumrnt various reasons are provided in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firslty, technology is the product of imagination and advanced thinking ability. Humans acquired knowledge and invented various technical gadgets and machine. All these machinery and high level equipement are possible because of thinking ability. Technology serves to ease the problems of human beings but it does not mean that it deteriote the thinking ability for themselves. Infact, it demands more thinking ability as these advancement also bring and create new problems which needed to be addressed and solved.For example, vehicles are a technological advancement but the pollution caused by it has made necessary for humans to overcome the pollution. Therefore, air purifiers and CNG are being used to tackle this problem. Hence, technology advancement is an ongoing process of thinking ability to overcome the day to day issues.
Moreover, it can be said that the technology is easing the process of problem solving and humans rely on it. But the major reason of relying on technology is that is saves time and is much efficient. Whether it is an engineering field or health sector these technologies are contributing in every way to achieve and progress more and more. Earlier in health sector, it wasn't possbile to do a lacroscopic surgery but humans invented a device which made it possible. So, it wouldn't have been possible without the ability of thinking for themselves or others.
On the contrary, these technologies may make people lazy and lethargic. As every coin has two sides, more reliance or overdependence on anything would result in a deterioting way. For instance, if students would rely more on using the calculator there might be chances that they wouldn't thrive in a better way incomparison to the previous generation. To much dependence will also stop them from thinking of alternative ways as they would get so used to of the technology. Hence, excess of dependence would result in a negative way.
In the conclusion, i can say that the technology does enable to think more and more to tackle the existing and new problems which may be due to technology itself. However, new generation may get too much used to of it and maybe not able to think effeciently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09582309582 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86626581446 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501228501229 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2039378351 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7619047619 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324011353336 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911767607264 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098815547606 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204421948394 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961942937924 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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