As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author's assumption, I disagree as the public depends on technology to come with the solution by time-saving and easily than can solve without any others helps. humans thinking will not decline. increases the ability to think more and more in a creative way by technology.
people rely on technology is not to decline their thinking capacity, depending on the internet, technology time-consuming and that time is occupied by another work. depending on the internet services so many invented new things. only by human thoughts and thinking, we will be back to 90's generation. based on technology we got led tv, dishwasher and so many, so rely on the technology will not decrease a human thinking capacity. by rely on technology will increase the human's thinking power. In today's total world is rely on technologies such as we improved more electronic devices and your basic requirements. if we are suffering from any health issues then who look over family and pets, so they are simple instructions to run the electronic devices even your can able to do that even if we are sick like a roti machine, washing machine vacuüm cleaners and so on.
so my statement is if people rely on technology can increase thinking capabilities, As the authors say humans thinking will deteriorate, it does not depend on technology we are not developed from now on, at the same humans thinking power could more and more, both the statements are true and are interlinked with each other. if a person, unfortunately, goes to the village if no technology and internet how can he do work in today's everywhere can work either work from home or café and so?
so, relevance to technology humans thinking will not deteriorate, increases the thinking capable more fast and time-saving, humans can relax for some time and thinks in a more creative way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
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...han can solve without any others helps. humans thinking will not decline. increases th...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a creative way" with adverb for "creative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ases the ability to think more and more in a creative way by technology. people rely on techn...
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...re in a creative way by technology. people rely on technology is not to decline th...
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... that time is occupied by another work. depending on the internet services so many invent...
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...t services so many invented new things. only by human thoughts and thinking, we will...
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...ing, we will be back to 90s generation. based on technology we got led tv, dishwasher...
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Suggestion: relied
...hinking power. In todays total world is rely on technologies such as we improved mor...
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Suggestion: If
...ic devices and your basic requirements. if we are suffering from any health issues...
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Suggestion: So
... machine vacuüm cleaners and so on. so my statement is if people rely on techn...
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Suggestion: If
...ue and are interlinked with each other. if a person, unfortunately, goes to the vi...
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...k either work from home or café and so? so, relevance to technology humans think...
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Suggestion:
...time and thinks in a more creative way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92903225806 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86709416103 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3861979969 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275711873282 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122013996541 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824037793615 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203500490369 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295615263285 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.