Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The university scholars can choose their courses by neither interest nor trending courses in today's technology.i to disagree with the above statement, the student's profundity is not known for others so choosing their field based on technology is not correct.
The students pick their fields is based on elders' suggestions and parents' force, they are responsible for their future by selecting correct fields. today's technology will not be there tomorrow. The parents are to understand that every child is having his/her own in any kind of field so the options should be chosen by your child not you guys. every student as to wake up and make their futures bright by own interest and responsibilities not for parents sack. one my friend had chosen his filed because of his parents, he is not interested in that course, his interest is on other activity but by co-parent forcing and elders suggestion he had taken that field. but he didn't complete his course. final exams are coming he is not able to read that course and no interest to write tests. His parents asked him about results he did not answer to them as he did not write assessment .finally one day he committed suicide no other option for him. he deceased all are in mourning and his parents came to that known by forcing on studies he is no more.
The parents can guide up to a particular age, the children are can go for courses and other activities, by attentiveness the child can do anything. The parents can suggest friendly to the child if he is going in the wrong way but does not force the infants to do this and that by seeing another elders.communicate with the children's not with others if you are wishing to you are to become it's than friendly you can talk to his/her and do not compare your child with other child's, it's so embracing for them.
Conclusion the students can do anything by his/her own and interest and sporadic. not by trending technologies, guides, elders and parents forces. The should take a standard about their future success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... disagree with the above statement, the students profundity is not known for others so c...
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Suggestion: Todays
...eir future by selecting correct fields. todays technology will not be there tomorrow. ...
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Suggestion: Every
...d be chosen by your child not you guys. every student as to wake up and make their fu...
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Suggestion: One
... responsibilities not for parents sack. one my friend had chosen his filed because ...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: But
...ers suggestion he had taken that field. but he didnt complete his course. final exa...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...gestion he had taken that field. but he didnt complete his course. final exams are co...
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Suggestion: Final
...ield. but he didnt complete his course. final exams are coming he is not able to read...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r to them as he did not write assessment .finally one day he committed suicide no ...
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Suggestion: He
...mitted suicide no other option for him. he deceased all are in mourning and his pa...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can go for courses and other activities, by attentiveness the child can do anythi...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...th the childrens not with others if you are wishing to you are to become its than friendly ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... his/her own and interest and sporadic. not by trending technologies, guides, elder...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72598870056 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6207763185 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480225988701 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3040528879 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18353058466 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724316709901 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720746885437 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133993864663 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719355540427 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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