As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In our day to day life technology plays very important role - Waking up with alarm in the morning, using coffee machine machine for coffee, using mobile application for travelling, ordering food and the list goes on. There is no doubt that technology made our lives easier, conversely too much use of technology for everything has negative impact.
Developments in technology has made life much easier. Some years back, before the invention of mobile phones , people used to write phone numbers on notebook and keep it safely. This way of keeping phone numbers had the disadvantage of being lost or getting damaged. Invention of mobile phone has made keeping phone numbers safely much easier since phones have inbuilt storage and numbers can be dialed easily from contact list. Then came smartphones that can perform the tasks, which were once limited to only computers. During the initial days of invention of phone , people must have had difficulty in using phones as they were new. Because of ability to think and apply, people are using phones very easily. People are adapting to technology because of their ability to think. As more and more progress happens in technological world , thinking ability of humans will also increase.
Use of technology in our day to day life saves much more time than earlier and also reduces some workload on humans. More free time and and a relaxed mind can lead to more thinking which is helpful to individual and for the society. So in a way use of technology leads to think us more. However some people may argue that use of technology reduces our thinking ability, in some sense it may seem true- for example using calculators for small operations like 2+2=4. If a smaller problem is a part of much bigger problem which takes a lot of time to solve, so using some sort of technology to solve smaller problem is definitely useful as it saves time.
Using home automation devices like Google Alexa has made humans bit lazier. This shows the over dependence on techonology. And using washing machine to do laundry has no part in reducing the thinking ability. Anything too much is too bad , technology is not an exception for this. Too much relying on technology will have bad impact in long time. So in conclusion, use of technology has a very big impact on our life depending on how we think to use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a very big impact on our life depending on how we think to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81683168317 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50074803044 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9104940892 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4545454545 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200755829279 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738159489603 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654579332149 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122721887257 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469535469577 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.