People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
It hard to define behavior. There are various definition of defining behavior, but generally behavior mean how some one react towards situation built up around there surrounding. people develop their behavior depending upon way they have been brought in up in society, their environment, families. I partially agree with given statement suggest that, People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Firstly, new born child observed all the surrounding thing, his family environment and accordingly growing. He may develop his mind partially from family environment but when he enter to society, his attitude, behavior changes accordingly. For example, if there are two group formed in group, they have quarrel for little issue. so, child observe the their quarrel, so his thinking change, he also quarrel with some one for getting thing to be done. It's total depend upon surrounding environment.
Secondly, in family elder person have play major role while driving family through financially, because if allow children monthly pocket money and not ask to children how they spent money. Whether they really need money and whether this money really spend for appreciable work. Because fear in children made him strong in future. If person not made strong rule and regulation for his family then their upcoming generation grasp same think which their parent made.
In opposite way, it's acceptable that people influenced by surrounding, but it altogether in an person hand how to react and how made changes. startlingly it takes struggle while introducing positive attributes in front of society. It takes some days, some years but rather if it successful then future view might be different. Let us take example, if an Indian Student went to United State of America. Even though he has lot of impact of Indian culture, he ruled out with United State rule. If put garbage on street, he charges dollar. so after completion of study and returned to India, then he can update not immediately towards society but starting from his own house.
In Conclusion, it's acceptable fact people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. But human has subconscious mind, which can change mind from doing thing. If person really want, then subconscious mind have power to make positive thing to be done by human being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...havior, but generally behavior mean how some one react towards situation built up around...
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Suggestion: People
...tion built up around there surrounding. people develop their behavior depending upon w...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enters'.
Suggestion: enters
...lly from family environment but when he enter to society, his attitude, behavior chan...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...ordingly. For example, if there are two group formed in group, they have quarrel for ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'quarreled', 'quarrelled'.
Suggestion: quarreled; quarrelled
...re two group formed in group, they have quarrel for little issue. so, child observe the...
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Suggestion: So
...up, they have quarrel for little issue. so, child observe the their quarrel, so hi...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...rel for little issue. so, child observe the their quarrel, so his thinking change, he als...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'quarrels'.
Suggestion: quarrels
...uarrel, so his thinking change, he also quarrel with some one for getting thing to be d...
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Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...s thinking change, he also quarrel with some one for getting thing to be done. Its total...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oney really spend for appreciable work. Because fear in children made him strong in fut...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ecause fear in children made him strong in future. If person not made strong rule and reg...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ed by surrounding, but it altogether in an person hand how to react and how made c...
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Suggestion: Startlingly
...hand how to react and how made changes. startlingly it takes struggle while introducing pos...
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Suggestion: So
...t garbage on street, he charges dollar. so after completion of study and returned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23298429319 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58726297791 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6291726109 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9130434783 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6086956522 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179600899586 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052676208925 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669070504167 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10509281169 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064049718443 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.