People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Instructions
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
People should not let their fears prevent them from taking important risks in life. Taking risks is what allows us humans to achieve success, joy and ultimate fulfillment. However, prior to taking any risky action, it is essential that people should carefully consider the consequences.
For example, there are some risky actions that are life-threatening such as skydiving. Of course, before you can begin to skydive, you must learn the basics of this sport. Additionally, by also studying what can go wrong during a skydive, and learning how to react to that scenario, that person will have the knowledge and ability to stay calm and hopefully make better decisions that will allow them to get out of a bad situation rather than falling into a panic.
This also pertains to decisions about money and business. Everyday people are making decisions that are ‘make or break’. For those who really understand the consequences of their actions, they are able to make a wiser decision that may have less of an impact on them if the business or investment deal goes awry. However, but not educating oneself, the consequences of one’s action are likely to be more severe.
Sometimes, knowing the consequences of an action causes fear that will stops us from taking any risky actions. As a result we miss out on potential successes and most of all “joy”. Therefore, by understanding the consequences, one can eliminate feat, learn how to react in a smarter fashion and lead a much more enriching life than if they had never taken those risks at all.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'of course', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.17445482866 0.240241500013 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.177570093458 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778816199377 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0623052959502 0.0497285424764 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498442367601 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0996884735202 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0436137071651 0.0406280797675 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86132605218 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342679127726 0.030933414821 111% => OK
Particles: 0.00311526479751 0.0016655270985 187% => OK
Determiners: 0.0872274143302 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342679127726 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0311526479751 0.0148568991511 210% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1673.0 2732.02544248 61% => OK
No of words: 275.0 452.878318584 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08363636364 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349090909091 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138181818182 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86132605218 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.48968727796 125% => OK
Word variations: 66.7861966277 55.4138127331 121% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6428571429 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0442567521 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.674092028746 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 43.6428571429 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.09677419355 1.64882698954 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298922796971 0.391690518653 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103563747748 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.053660607063 0.077325440228 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.549037132245 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179541718544 0.149214159877 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11948239362 0.161403998019 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970581907921 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224097935492 0.385218514788 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0668403031166 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211882818994 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09595508508 0.0653680567796 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.