People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
People often take a risk in their lives without knowing end result of it. This might sometimes be beneficial but not always. Hence, taking any risky action without knowing consequences is not a fair choice.
Firstly, people do undertake risky actions in a desire to achieve more, in order to achieve these desires, they often forget the consequences, if these actions do not turn out well. For example, Mr D. S. Kulkarni, a well-known builder and businessman in India, had taken hefty loan amounts from the bank. Many investors had also invested in his business. But after many of his unsuccessful projects, he was unable to give the money back to the investors and pay the loan amount. Because of this, he had to face judicial trial, consequentially got arrested. These types of situations arise because of an incorrect evaluation of the consequences of these risky actions. Hence, people should analyse the consequences and then only undertake risky action.
Furthermore, many people also have habits like smoking cigarette, drinking alcohol, etc. Smoking and drinking even have become fashion symbols in the recent young generation. People do not even realise that they are risking their lives for these bad habits. Even after trying several times, many of them cannot resist the urge of these bad habits. In these types of situations, people do not even think while taking risks and end up suffering their whole life. Hence people should consider the consequences, in order to avoid the detrimental side effects they will face, before taking any risky action.
Nowadays, some people even choose their career option as a risk analyst, one of the most trending jobs of a new era. These people help businessmen, investors to analyse the risk and make an appropriate decision. These analysts work on the previous data configurations and predict the future of any company or firm. Businessmen, investors often consider the opinions of these analysts to make a cautious choice. These types of analysis always help people to achieve the desired result and hence, one can say that people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
To conclude, evaluating the consequences always help people to accomplish their goal and hence people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...s might sometimes be beneficial but not always. Hence, taking any risky action without...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... and end up suffering their whole life. Hence people should consider the consequences...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20680628272 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69564495819 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510471204188 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4845129127 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4782608696 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6086956522 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452338390393 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125192218337 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179828488302 0.0758088955206 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310135833771 0.150359130593 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186306728687 0.0667264976115 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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