People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Some people avoid risky actions and prefer to stay in their comfort zone instead of taking the chance and try to thrive in their life. They may fear losing whatever they have instead of gain more. Risky actions, however, have consequences that should consider before taking action, but staying in one place to avoid possible consequences is not reasonable. Thus, I agree with the argument that risky actions should do after considering the aftermath carefully, and I will explain my reasons now.
First of all, taking risks has always had huge advantages for humankind. For instance, the discovery of America could mention as a huge achievement by taking a risk by Christophe Colomb. America has done a lot for the world after discovery, and it is the result of taking chance. Staying in a comfort zone and afraid of finding new places could lead to lethargic behavior for people.
However, considering the consequences of risky actions is crucial. Without thinking about upshots, people may face some problems that are not correctable. For instance, a person who invests all of his money in the stock market in the hope of taking advantage may have face some disaster and lose all of his money, because we can find a lot of situation the stock market plummeted in history. On the other hand, Warren Buffett, who is one of the rich people in the world, has gained all of his money from investing in the stock market. What he did professionally is considering the consequences of the risky actions that want to do, then if the potential advantages are more significant than the consequences he would take the chance.
On the other hand, some people consider risky actions like gambling. Taking risks due to excitement feeling has always been interesting, as you may find lots of people in history that gamble not for gaining money for just feeling the exciting situation. However, they face uncorrectable consequences in their life like bankruptcy, divorce, and like that. The main reason for these consequences is that they did not think about the consequences of their actions.
In conclusion, although taking risks and doing risky actions have had several achievements for humankind, considering the consequences of actions is an indivisible part of risky actions. Warren Buffett could be an example of a person that considers his risky actions and lead him to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...n the hope of taking advantage may have face some disaster and lose all of his money...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of situations'.
Suggestion: a lot of situations
...e all of his money, because we can find a lot of situation the stock market plummeted in history. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73946023578 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482323232323 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5226051784 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.210526316 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277140210056 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935583810963 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569620852236 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162084151979 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602985202905 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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