People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Risks means taking unwanted step which may result as good or bad. People should only take risky action only after they have scrupulously gone through its results. The prompt here recommends that people, sometimes are unaware of risky steps they have taken. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that taking risky steps needs very accurate judgement.
To begin, In today's world the technology if growing with high speed and also is leading in competition. If people take unwanted steps to increase their wealth, it may result to lower their position. For instance, a company named ROX is gaining profit from five years and now the owner has suggestion to bring the company to produce more goods then required and a company named MAPO is gaining profit from five months and the owner of company due to its greedy nature starts comparing the company with ROX and produces more goods and finally it leads to loss. So this examples says that one should not compare or be greedy by looking at others, he/she should always watch his/her growth of action or the situation to take risky action only after considering its consequences.
Further, Taking risky action is quite famous for young's or teenagers due to their unmaturity. If young's start to take unwilling task or action it may result to great loss. For example, a student goes to school and after listening to his friends conversation and getting encouraged by his friends, starts to play games which has very threating task. The game consist of getting cuts on body or jumping from high mountains and so on. Due to his puerile nature the student starts to take high interest in that game and with increasing levels his task are so threating he starts to get worried. This examples perfectly says that young's need to get very proper training so he/she has perfect knowledge when to take risk and when to not take risk after analysing the result. However some argue that risky action may sometime bring to great increment to our life but always consider what if it does not bring? It would lead to high loss. So always go through detail analysis of the situation before taking risky action to save the loss.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_NNS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'more goods than'?
Suggestion: more goods than
...gestion to bring the company to produce more goods then required and a company named MAPO is ga...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...bring the company to produce more goods then required and a company named MAPO is ga...
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Line 5, column 770, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t take risk after analysing the result. However some argue that risky action may someti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78835978836 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30453499741 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4498864066 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20831415743 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746109846413 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669179431564 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164684970222 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711753558206 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.