People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers
Write a response in which you discuss the extend do you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these consideration shape your position
It is commonly believed that the decision which is made by emotion and having said this decision based on logic is unsatisfactory decision making. Throughout this statement, I agree that in order to make right decision, ones have to put their emotion behind and attempt to view the problem in clear mind. I also agree that those who still having bias on their decision is likely a bad decision maker.
First and foremost, in order to select the best decision regarding certain problems, I do believe that people have to re-activate their thinking process, despite they have a desire to be directly fix the problem or feel uncomfortable of it, it is clearly unwise if they just make decision in a short time, and then giving argument that they have think deeply about the decision they have made. To think what is best for them, the people might have to identifying the problems first, and to be able to view the problems using different perspectives. By doing this, they can hinder from a bias judgment coming from their unstable emotion. Therefore, temperament people who perhaps judge the problem by looking at their side, are likely showing worst performance at making particular decision. They probably, think one think that make them comfortable without thinking the consequence of the decision they have taken.
Although, when people are restricted by time, sometimes, they have to make and decide one thing quickly. Thus, they are depending on their own emotion at that time, they are facing the problems. Others might use their past experience to guide them making the right choices and preventing the falsehood options. Do they bad decision maker?, I think no, since they do have limited time and I think that it is acceptable as long as they can be responsible on their decision and could not bring disadvantages to others.
It is true that, people saying that they considering all the benefits and drawbacks of each decisions they have done, in fact they only relying on their own feeling instead of their logic. However, this also is commonly happening in real life, particularly for businessman. When they have to meet some challenges to launch their brand new products and they cannot expect that the product is not successfully attract the customers, they have to make decision whether to make a revision or keep distribute the products. Because the businessman believes that the products that have are unique and can be popular thus, he keeps running promoting the products to the wider society member.
By way of conclusion, I believe that in order to make a good decision, human being should use their logic including their analytical thinking, however those who have certain experience and use their emotion for making decision not solely are judged as a poor decision maker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...and then giving argument that they have think deeply about the decision they have mad...
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have to identify'?
Suggestion: have to identify
...what is best for them, the people might have to identifying the problems first, and to be able to v...
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Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'showing the worst'.
Suggestion: showing the worst
...em by looking at their side, are likely showing worst performance at making particular decisi...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nd decide one thing quickly. Thus, they are depending on their own emotion at that time, they...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ng the problems. Others might use their past experience to guide them making the right choices ...
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Line 4, column 579, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...an believes that the products that have are unique and can be popular thus, he keep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, thus, i think, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 33.0505617978 206% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97228144989 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59401972078 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484008528785 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1922482198 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.176470588 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206010207649 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877218226727 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793732529935 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160282614766 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785763257506 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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