Decision making is an ability of human to think upon all the alternatives, do brainstorming and then make a wise decision. The above statement claims that people who make decision based on emotion and justify those decision with logic afterwards are poor decision maker. I agree with above claim as in my view decisions should always be made by proper understanding the situation, taking into consideration all circumstances and looking deeply upon the problem and analyzing the consequences of the decision.
Some people makes decision based on their emotion and later regret for it, to exemplify,while shopping one tends to buy more product as they attach their emotions to it, but at the end of the day, they realize that half of the products werent required at all. Another severe example would be, some person takes impulsive decision in a moment of high emotions, there are many cases of girls being the victim of acid attacks. A person in the moment of high emotion gets impulsive which leads them to take a step which may be dangerous and risky to them and others too. Thus making decision at the moment of high emotions should always be avoided as it always proves to be harmful to the society.
At sometime making decision based on emotion may in the end prove to be a good one, For example, A girl decides to educate a poor child by funding all the necessary requirements, if in this case if the girl wouldnt have thought emotionally then she might have not resulted in educating the child. In all, Decision based on emotion may sometimes lead to a good decision but not always proves to be a better one. High Emotions drives human into a situation where he/she is not able to make the right decision.
In conclusion, Decision should always be made by thorough understanding of the situation ,analyzing all the factors and circumstances and the consequences of the decision.Considering all this factors if someone is making a decision,then it will always be the right one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86217008798 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85248770918 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49853372434 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3962688074 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.727272727 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394053981704 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189403946221 0.0831039109588 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206465437437 0.0758088955206 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25595513878 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159153778988 0.0667264976115 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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