People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I am here to give an about different kind of decision makers who take decisions indivudually.The authoris mains point of view based on human emotions. I would like to give sum up the different scenarios and situations of people .Following are elobaroated in 2 ways.
People often make decisions based on their emotions and their perspective.To begin with there are people who step into wrong decisions when they are in aggreesive mode later on they will realise and felt sorry among themselves,But those realisation doesnt make any difference in the person whom they lost.According to science most of the humans lost themselves when they are in aggresive mode .The entire world is working with the word called "EGO"
Simmilarily, there is also a case where people behave according to their situations,they will move according to the situation and later on they will explain about their intention inorder to not to make the story prolong or not to make the issue serious.people who often behave according to the situation are very rare now a days. these people are generally considered as problem solvers when compared to that particular situation
Firstly,The authors point of view is true in some cases and false as well in some cases. human brain works on manipulation they are people around us who regularly motivate us to behave with people this motivation is further eloborated into two types:- positivelty motivated and negatively motivated
In contrast to the above point positively motivated people are often considered as cool because they know when to behave and what to doo at the critical stage.They are basically motivated with the moral values which further helps in future generation. As per the reasearch released they people who act according to the situations are very rare now-days.as many people are not having a basic moral to respect each other in their surroundings.
However, the negatively motivated people main moto is to do the mistakes as they are continously motivated by the wrong perspective.these people often not considered as a criminals but they are criminal minded. they do the works and regret later on for their mistakes.According to the science negatively motivated people are 8 in every 10 people now-a-days. the main problem for this behaviour is related to the word called "EGO"
To sum up with the conclusion in the authors point of view "People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers" is entirely based on the human behaviour to about the emotions and situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22748815166 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07015739744 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473933649289 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.779263215 60.3974514979 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.111111111 118.986275619 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.8888888889 23.4991977007 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 5.21951772744 270% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228486702654 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968066820268 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091605343566 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135328742568 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114952159879 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 14.1392134831 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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