It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
compromising with one's belief implies a person let go off his morals just because of some petty selfish gains, or he don't have guts to stand up against what he considers wrong, or he considers it to be simple enough than opposing and taking some pain.All the above are indications of a person with low morals and inner strength. thus, I completely agree with the author's assertion that it is harmful to compromise with one's belief.I have substantial reasons to support my position. A few includes:
First, a person will lose one's individuality and self belief.if one work in a company whose ideals and policies he don't agree with, or he don't agree with his boss unethical business practices and still don't have guts to stand against it. that person will lose respect for himself and it's a vicious circle that keeps on going.
Additionally,it's a loss of integrity, mutual co-operation and reliance. For instance, what if people like Mahatma Gandhi and Nelson Mandela would have adjusted with their belief against foreign atrocities just because it was tough to stick to their own ideals. Nothing good can be achieved without hard-work, dedication and commitment. people will lose faith in one another.Furthermore, think of situation if our politicians, military officials start compromising with their principles.
some may claim, that it is more harmful to stick with one's beliefs.because, they might be pointing at short term benefits such as sticking to a bad job, giving in to corruption just because it seems simpler.ones belief should be flexible, coherent with the time. For instance, when Galileo came up his heliocentric theory people adhered to their belief of suncentric theory,which is not at all appropriate. With changing times may be situations and circumstances change. one should be open to innovations but it cannot be attributed that since, one is open to change compromising with one's beliefs is also appropriate.
In the light of above points it can be justified that, compromising with one's beliefs is a slippery slope.Once you let it go, it's hard to return. thus, it can be concluded that compromising with own belief make the person lose his or her confidence, identity, self respect and individuality and is thus deleterious in long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12365591398 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02684352236 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5775382353 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212832590838 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740359845055 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049757039866 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117034336525 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031558693341 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.