People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers
First of all,Emotional decisions are those which are taken from the heart rather that having a firm background logic before taking the decision.Emotions many times can come in the way of making the correct choice.Hence it is highly debated whether emotional decisions should be taken over logical decisions.As emotions prevent us from thinking rationally it hinders our approach for a problem.Emotions do not allow us to think a long term plan rather force us to think about the current situation.Hence the claim positively connects people who make emotional decisions as poor decision makers.
When we take into consideration emotions we often take into account our loved ones and things that are dear to us.We are afraid of losing lives rather than looking at the big picture.For example during a war it is a tough decision for any country to send its soldiers in the heat of a battle but they protect the millions of citizens in their country.The decision of sending soldiers or not has to be taken logically beforehand as millions of lives are at stake.These decisions if taken on the basis of emotion can cause many casualties and cannot be justified by any logical means.
Another example is the recent air strikes done by the Indian Air Force on terrorist camps in Pakistan as a retaliation for the bombing on Indian military bases.An emotional response would have been to invade the country of Pakistan but a logical decision was set up by the India Prime Minister of strategic air strikes only at terrorist camps.Such situations require logical thinkers over emotional thinkers.
On the contrary,it cannot be completely regarded that emotional decisions are always poor decisions.For example during the independence of the India many freedom fighters fought without proper weapons and lost their lives for the country.It was an emotional decision to choose country over ones family and to fight under any circumstances but it can be justified that only due to their actions India is a free democratic country today.
Hence it can be concluded that although emotional thinkers are not always poor decision makers many situations require logical thinking beforehand.Logical thinking helps in working towards a long term goal rather than short term goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1961852861 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93594422695 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531335149864 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 23.0359550562 317% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.149380479 60.3974514979 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.4 118.986275619 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.4 23.4991977007 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4 5.21951772744 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353065325252 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195283358043 0.0831039109588 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821163216152 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195283358043 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821163216152 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.8 14.1392134831 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.08 48.8420337079 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 12.1743820225 270% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 11.2143820225 278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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