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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Decison makeing is one of the invtable quality of a human being considering its output.A good decision may evince our emotion or our brain but which will over another may elicit the output of that decision.Therefore, I concede that this proposition for making a decision supporting one's emotion stymie the growth and will be a poor decision-maker

Firstly, consider thoose individual who is more vulnerable to their emotion will make poor decision according to their appetite and regarding their precepitious decision they will suffer in the long run,and for this regret will come to thwart their future hylcyon.

Secondlly, people who give infofar prority to their emotion and consience wont able to rule their brain against their heart,as a result they will eschew the important details with their impetuous remark.for example, let an indivial have to choose an employee for his/her company, if it comes first to cede their brain to its heart, then it will be a easy to step to oblitere the development and outweigh the benefit by choosing a kindered one without having any rudimentary idea and hence will shuned any qualified candidate.

Moreover,if any case came like to choose any decision wth forthwith than it will not be easy to make it by only heart.You can easily make any illicit step if you cant consider your logic making capability.

However,some decision may need to use your emotion to rule.For example,if you want to buy a ticket for your favourate team final match, then your brain wont evince your interest considering it a waste of money rather than use it another productive business.

Finally, we should therefore seek to accored our brain to plausively to rule over any envy or prejudice to make a fruitfull decision and proof our aplomb.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06484641638 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74576719669 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.0359550562 252% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.524385301 60.3974514979 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.8 118.986275619 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6 23.4991977007 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.8 5.21951772744 494% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248389131873 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130928545417 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858547670739 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136249322877 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741533137775 0.0667264976115 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 14.1392134831 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 48.8420337079 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 12.1743820225 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.2143820225 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments