Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account to live comfortably in a place. Personally, I believe that living nowadays is more peaceful than my grandparents' time. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the education facilities are easier than the previous era which improves the quality of life. In the previous time, the educational instruments were not so available at all. If anyone missed a class, there was no way to pass those lectures to them which now possible using the internet. Moreover, through ebook knowledge can be penetrated more easily which makes a successful alternative for the hardcopy book. My personal experience is a compelling example of it. About 5 years ago, I went to visit my grandmother. She lives far from our city and I had an exam knocking at the door. So, while traveling there I couldn't carry my book but I was getting my proper access through all study material via the Internet. Consequently, my grandmother was very amazed when she saw my kindle which I used then to read book. Moreover, she also told me that in her time once she had some serious injury which made it hard for him to attend most of the classes. As a result, she had to drop one semester from college. However, in our time, I can easily get access through my class lectures when I was far away from my college at my grandmother's place.
Secondly, the condition of medical facilities improves today which ensures a healthier life. In the previous generation, cure of many lethal diseases was not available. consequently,this results demise of a lot of people without proper treatment. For instance, when my father was a child, my grandfather died. I heard that story from my father. He was suffering from cholera which was the cause of his death. My father was only 10 years old then. As a result, he couldn't take him to the hospital in the city. Consequently, my grandfather passed away without a proper cure for cholera in the suburban area which medicine is now available all around the places. This melancholy suffers my father a lot. Thanks to our technology, I don't have to face any situation as my father did.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the lifestyle of these days is more easy and convenient than previous generations. This is because of untrammeled educational and medical science growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78177458034 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81634436295 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7502008671 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2142857143 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8928571429 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0786101182401 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240911909405 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322833296686 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684658781673 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538017856214 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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