Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
This topic upraises the controversial issue of whether teaching morally will be the foundation of education or citical thinking would do more to produce a moral society.Indisputably,teaching morally somethimes makes the foundation of education by evinceing the actual judgement of education.Nevertheless, only moral teaching will not be the foundation of education without the logical reasoning.Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that only moral teaching would be the foundation of education and would concur that good foundation in critical thinking make more to establish a moral society.
First of all, logical thinking makes oneself to judge between the right and wrong which is the foundation of moral society.I would like to point out that crtical thinking can produce a storm in a populace brain by which they can question their conscience and make moral society.To illustrate, let us look at the paragon of a moral place like a open shop business where everyone have pay according to their moral dignity, no salesman will be there to collect the payment.In shop like this one must make their logical thinking to judge about what to day, if judgement shows to comensurate the payment with respect to the product than a citizen can establish such place.Consequently, it is pretty ineluctable that without logical think a moral place will not be established.
Furtheremore, in a vicious place where everyone vilifies other, they didn't question their own soul why they concur with such a caluminate act,where the answer will be the lack of critical thinking.Specifically,in a immoral or vicious place without critical thinking morality will not be established.
Admittedly, sometimes teaching morality can be the foundation of education if consider the teaching field is most parallal to phychological and social science where logical thinking doesn't need like science and mathematical field.Hence, both shrewdnedness and savoir faire have told us that logical thinking can be the pillar of moral thinking .
In termination , although in some case teaching morally be the foundation of education but this is not found in all the aspect as long as moral augment is needed we have to be logically concoinable to make a proper judgement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3615819209 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47916590282 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.925352263 60.3974514979 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 379.6 118.986275619 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.8 23.4991977007 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.2 5.21951772744 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398075222902 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252426986828 0.0831039109588 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146412308075 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252426986828 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146412308075 0.0667264976115 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.2 14.1392134831 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 48.8420337079 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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