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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Man is a social animal.Every person makes decision based on his/her choice.These decisions may sometimes be driven by logic or sometimes by emotions.Both decisions which are either made by logic or emotion are not always correct. I disagree with the author where he assumes that all the decisions based on emotions which are justified with logic afterwards end up in being bad decisions which may not be true as some decisions may turn out even more coherent once paired up with logic.

Firstly,situation demands the type of decisions that we make. Some situations require us to make impulsive emotional decisions while in some we have time to analyse and make logical ones.Having said that the impulsive emotional ones when later thought upon with logic can turn out to be like a blessing in disguise.For instance, in a burgeoning family business initially a family member may be emotionally obliged to make a decision and join the business and later it may be found that the business is booming due to that member’s skillset this could prove fruitful to their entire family.

Secondly,some decisions taken emotionally which seem a bit illogical at first might turn out in our favour and might help us in building our career.People generally complete their education and start working and later on realise that their passion is in some other work. They follow their passion after on which may be seem like an emotional decision at first but later when logically taught this decision would have made him much more financially stable than his earlier working job.For instance , many people working in corporates after a point find their job to be very mundane in nature , and leave their job to follow their passion like stand up comedy or acting etc. This decision might be emotional and risky but later when logically planned the person could easily earn twice or thrice of what he was earning before and be happy with what they are doing.

However,in an official environment some business decisions are made in the spur of the moment or emotionally depending upon the relationship with the other person making the deal.For instance , if the person from the other company has made several successful deals with them, then this time without clearly analyzing them we would spuriously make the deal which could later have a deleterious impact on the company.Hence if the person later tries to prove this decision with any logic it still has no worth as it is proven wrong.

In sum, every decision made whether it is emotional or logical has some type of goal associated with it which one has to complete.The end result must be the completion of that goal , thus even if that decision is made based on emotion and then logically justified does not make it a poor decision as long as the goal is achieved.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92226890756 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65675158663 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47268907563 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.208206015 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.333333333 118.986275619 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.8888888889 23.4991977007 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 5.21951772744 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426082608306 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225536108859 0.0831039109588 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09949385393 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282849163527 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105546264978 0.0667264976115 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for instance

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