People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
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Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
the prompt is stating that people who took decisions emotionally and justifies them later are not wise in decision making. the following findings can evaluate the prompt :
At the begining, we need to think about the definition of a good or wise thinker. so, who is a wise decision-maker? the person who puts his emotion aside while taking a decision is simply called a wise decision-maker. Because, if anyone takes a decision emotionally the decision more likely to seem as wrong. because in an emotional way, we can not think of all the effects of that decision and we can not think wisely either. So, it is easy to make wrong decisions while emotional. Even if, we take a decision emotionally, we should rethink it afterward rather not justify that decision
now, another question is that what if we justify those wrong decisions? if we justify the wrong decision we have taken previously, that reflects our silliness lucidly. for example, if a project manager is reprimanded by his CEO and later took a decision to leave the project, it would be the worst decision of his life. because he might be fired from the job after this type of unprofessional behavior.
finally, the question that should be answered is- what should one do if he takes a decision emotionally? if anybody takes a decision emotionally , he should rethink the circumstances of that decision and act wisely. one should not be intransigent while taking a major decision. one should not justify his decision blindly. because the farther consequences of this type of decision could be dangerous and innocuous.
So, in conclusion , one should take the decisions wisely and should consider all of it's consequences afterward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99647887324 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91005229771 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496478873239 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4748574351 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376163181111 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153952240896 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814142119367 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217384503802 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662119902889 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.