People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

Emotional-based decisions are made by listening to the heart, rather than the mind. The decision is the most critical aspect in every field and emotional based decision do not serve good impact. The prompt recommends that those people who make emotion-based decision first and then bolster it with logic after that will not serve fruitful purpose, rather those people are regarded as poor decision maker. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the recommendation and argue that decicion should be make wisely with proper logical assumptions to become a well decision maker in the following paragraphs.

Firstly, Emotion-based decisions are not useful for most of the cases. Those decisions are highly contigent on several factors that made the decision makers emotionally sad, happy or elated. When a boss of a particular company is elated due to the high profit of his company after a decade and he was so cheerful that de decided to increase the salary of the employees. After one month, when the company again goes to debt, the the boss is sure to be remorseful because of his prior decision of increasing the salary of the employees. Does that serve a useful porpose? Therefore, those decisions made under emotional condition are not fruitful.

Furthermore, once the decision is made people can do anything to support it, which is utterly poor. Is't it true that anyone having one stance does anything to back up his assertion? The same principle will follow in this condition. For instance, once a PM of Nepal had decided to increase the salary of the national football player during the great joy of victory of the nation over India in the final match of South Asian Games. Later on the primeminister did everthing to back up his decision by asserting that the players are the valuable aid of the country and many more claims. Thu, it is sure that once the decision has been made it is backed up by every possible illogical logic,

However, some people might argue that emotion-based decision are the good ones that are backed up by logic before or afterward, it does not matter. Those people think that in those decisions there is an emotion attached, which will not only serves good purpose but also capable to be viable due to the strong attachment to it. Those people, nevertheless, do not have idea about the how the emotion based decision cannot work when the circumstance changes-say- the decision made during spirited mood do not work equally when it is in gloomy condition. The decision made during the zenith of ecomomy doesnt serve fruitful during recession period, as plans are made ambitious during high economic times and that do not equivalently proper for recession period.

In conclusion, decisions made emotionally and backed up later are poor decisions, and that do not serve useful purpose when the circumstances change because the logic attached with those decision are not compelling and those are dead-end. Thus, careful examination is necessary before takiing decisions scrutinizing properly.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2530.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03984063745 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68460571103 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482071713147 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4924828215 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.476190476 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9047619048 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399280500796 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136215224883 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989778429575 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253141318242 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995415494229 0.0667264976115 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments