Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Scientific discoveries have posed both advantages and disadvantages on human beings around the world: providing a better idea of the globe and at the same time the complexity of the world around us. The issue topic is highly contentious in itself and it is difficult to align with a single side, thus I slightly deviate towards the former claim- scientific innovations elucidate the world around us- in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, The advent of scientific discoveries helped us to know much about the origin of the earth and several evolutions that made life possible on earth. Great scientists not only earned names and fame in the world by identifying new theories, but they also helped general people to know much about the world. For instance, the first human evolution, ecosystem, and human civilization and its development clearly provide enough evidence of how life exists on earth and how it had been developed.
Furthermore, The modern world is rife with advanced communications and transportations not only made easy to know about the ongoing circumstances of the world but also aid equally to know about the particular culture, tradition, and way of living of people all around the world. The development of airplanes, for example, helps us to travel around the globe and know the beautiful culture and tradition of individuals. In addition to that, a proliferation of the internet and communication sector helped us to contact any person we want through plenty of social sites. Thus scientific discoveries have helped us more to know about the world.
However, some people have a different opinion on this matter and argue that instead of providing a better idea of the world and elucidate, scientific innovation makes the world more confounding with more complexity. The reason behind the claim is that the difference of time zone, the variation of land structure: some part of the world have higher altitude whereas other parts have lower one, some place is full of water and vegetation while other is ripe with sand and dust. These difference in various factor leads people that these discoveries are byzantine.
In conclusion, Though some portion of the populace have dissonant views on the given topic of scientific discoveries, asserting that those discoveries have made them confused, the other positive side of the topic-scientific discoveries helped to know more about the world partially outweighs the latter one. Regarding the advent of technology to know more about other places and cultures, human civilizations and evolution made it clear that the former is slightly better than later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20330969267 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88208660837 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505910165485 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5927447456 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.214285714 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2142857143 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 5.21951772744 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348363342372 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133412661741 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08069152962 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201245477177 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502627937298 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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