People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Decision based on emotion, logic has its own merits and demerits. The question arises which decision prove to be right? Well its a perspective and an analysis needs to be done in order to answer the question. However, before this recommendation can be properly evaluated, two questions must be answered.
How can one decide which decision is right or wrong? Whether the decision made based on emotion or the decision made on the basis of logic and practicality? For instance, In a company manager has the responsibility to get the work done, thats what the managers are for. When an employee fails to do the work in a given period of time he/she is responsible for the consequences. Here comes the decision making, Manager enters into the picture for taking the action. The action of the manager can be based on emotion, if the employee is a friend or family or is older enough to not to take action. If the manager spares the employee for failing then the result in future work might get impacted. But if the neccessary action are taken by the manager then he/she sounds purely professional. So here is the conclusion for the question, emotional decisions always stands a chance of 50-50 whereas, logic and practical based decisions are taken with due respect of all the circumstances. Which includes study of all the aspects and results of taking the decision. Emotional decision comes with a surprise so one's work might be done luckily or not. So, there is a high chance of getting a success in logic based decision than in emotional one. And so the arguement holds the water based on above questions.
Secondly, decision making is an ability which is not with all the people. It comes with an experience and with way one holds the situation. Knowledge is power and this power enables one to make an appropriate decision when and where necessary. For an educated and knowledgeble person decision based on emotion will not satisfy because it does not give the vision of the results unlike logic based decision. For more clarity here is an example. In trading the buyer who buys the stocks has to first study the statistics of the movement of stock, background and current status of the company whose stock has to be bought plays an important role. So, if the trader buys the stock with an intution or just because he felt that the stock might go up and result into profit, might end up losing all the money invested in the stock. This is because there was no logic or practicality in buying the stock. Which results in poor decision as one possibly losses all the money. If the above is true then the original argument is significantly strenthen.
In the conclusion, the argument, as it stands now, is considerably strong enough. Because it is always better to study and analyse the situation before making any decision. Because it results either in your favor or against it but in either circumstance you are aware of the resuAs once the boat is sailed there is nothing one can do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mployee fails to do the work in a given period of time he/she is responsible for the consequen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 523.0 441.139720559 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71319311663 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5933686765 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460803059273 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 705.55239521 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.70958083832 332% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 19.7664670659 152% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3026229998 57.8364921388 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4333333333 23.324526521 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31474467759 0.218282227539 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902997564064 0.0743258471296 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835114371423 0.0701772020484 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179535977545 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965735295225 0.0628817314937 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.3799401198 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 98.500998004 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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