People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Humans are carriers of emotional baggage. People always passes through ups and downs of their life and that is how the life is! A layman's decision will surely be influenced by his emotional stage. The prompt that is broached in this passage is that People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. Well i agree to this prompt as i opine that it is not impossible to ignore the emotions for the time being and consider the repercussions of your decisions. A wise human will surely think above his emotions and take an appropriate decision.Some people takes decision based on their emotions and then justify them, and according to me their decision making is flaw. For instance, think of a man whose father was murdered and in order to take vengeance he then kills the murderer and then was sentenced long prison due to breaking of law. Is his decision correct? If he would have thought wisely and let the cops do their work, he would not be facing long imprisonment.
Decisions based on emotions can lead to more problems. World has faced many instances where wrong decisions have lead to catastrophic events. For instance the Hitler influenced the people of Germany that allied powers have exploited their resources for a long time and galvanized Germans to indulge into a war that resulted in death of millions of people. When Mohammad Gazni invaded India, he burned into ashes the University of Nalanda and he later regretted for his decision because of the precious knowledge that was inscribed in the books.
Today all the successful organizations, countries and institutions are prefer the executives who prefer logic while taking important decisions rather guided by emotions. People take harsh steps based on logic and prevailing circumstances rather than guided by emotions. Many family businesses are on the verge of extinction because their decision making was flawed and they preferred their family first this decision was guided my emotional sentiments rather than logical based decision making.
Emotional decision making in the field of politics can ruin the careers of a politician. For instance, in 1975 Indira Gandhi, the then Prime Minister of India imposed emergency on the people in order to save her throne but after two years of this unconstitutional decisions derived by her emotional sentiments lead to her loose in the further elections.
No doubt that as humans we cannot escape from our emotions but we have the ability to put aside those emotions for a time and look forward to see how the decisions based on emotions can ruin our life, Institution, career as well as nation. Supporting your decision afterward with logic afterwards will not reverse what has already took place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, well, while, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05422993492 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66042487976 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509761388286 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1838398089 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.631578947 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34156007911 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123200316528 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102770752302 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194127027819 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561261910546 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.