A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
At this very moment somewhere in the world crime is being committed, it may be impulsive or a well though out crime. The nature and reason of crime is of great importance while judging its severity. I do not agree with the statement that people knowingly committing crime shall lose his or her civil rights as well as right to benefit from his or her labor.
The nature of crime needs to be highly comprehended. A crime can be petty as stealing few dollars to very serious such murdering someone. For example, recently a man was arresting for not paying his bills and mortgage. Later, it was found out that the man was suffering from cancer. He had to spend a lot of his money and savings on his treatment, due to which he was unable to pay his mortgage or bills. In such cases the person must not lose his civil rights or benefits from labor. These are conditions when we must understand that even though crime was committed some leniency is necessary. In this cases state should grant amnesty as well as allow full retainment of civil rights.
However, when serious crimes are considered justice system must be stern with the castigation. Although the criminals must be punished in the cases of murder or rape, they must not loose their civil rights. Our civil rights are what makes us human. Civil rights are bestowed upon us by the laws of state. Denying one of civil rights would be betraying humanity. Also, taking away ones right to benefit from his or her own labor will be slavery. Our justice system should strive to make criminals better humans instead of treating them like animals, i.e, taking away their rights.
Conversely, not taking ones civil right away might help a criminal get lose. For example, if an criminal is affluent he might be able to hire top lawyers to fight for his case. Because of his civil rights he will be able to have a lawyer. Even if he couldn't afford a lawyer, countries government will provide one. As a result, there is a chance that a criminal might get lose. During such times, we must trust our judges and juries for coming to a right conclusion and accepting their decision, instead of denying the suspect of his civil rights. For example, if we have a suspect who is accused of committing a crime, but we deny him his civil rights. This will cause him in becoming a convict without even having a fair trial. Hence, one should not lose hii civil rights as well as right to benefit from his or her labor.
Consequently, the nature of crime decides the punishment for the crime. However, to be humane one must not be forced to do away with his civil rights and right to earn benefits from his or her labor.
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...allow full retainment of civil rights. However, when serious crimes are conside...
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...nimals, i.e, taking away their rights. Conversely, not taking ones civil right ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'conversely', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209829867675 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.164461247637 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0737240075614 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0661625708885 0.0497285424764 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0850661625709 0.0444667217837 191% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111531190926 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0567107750473 0.0406280797675 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.32820865808 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302457466919 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0113421550095 0.0016655270985 681% => OK
Determiners: 0.0661625708885 0.0997080785238 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0396975425331 0.0249443105267 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00945179584121 0.0148568991511 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2683.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 480.0 452.878318584 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58958333333 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30625 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189583333333 0.280924506359 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11875 0.200843997647 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0708333333333 0.132149295362 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32820865808 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464583333333 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.7461275189 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6194690265 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5517241379 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5845546341 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5172413793 141.124799967 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5517241379 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48275862069 0.674092028746 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 35.5100574713 51.4728631049 69% => OK
Elegance: 1.19760479042 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403386980407 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0934030079405 0.123202303941 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0870507320094 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.412094007683 0.547984918172 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116930637414 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12703003416 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102142310132 0.0892212321368 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.345196185202 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0412209942451 0.0692045440612 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305604903606 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713337951675 0.0653680567796 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.30420353982 302% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.