A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
A crime is a crime no matter whether one commits it knowingly or unknowingly. Someone who commits a crime need to be punished no matter what.A person who commits a crime should never be allowed to escape from the eyes of the law.Nonetheless is the person who commits a crime knowingly.Someone who commits a crime knowingly deserves more than the others who do it unknowingly.
Punishments are for people who abide by the law.Law and order is indispensable for the proper governance of the state and to maintain peace and harmony.People who commit crime or does not abide by the law need to be punished which serves as a leading light for them to repent from their mistakes and to not do it again.But people who commit crimes knowingly ,when treated by the same way ,it has no effect on them. So people who commit crimes knowingly should be deprived of their social rights or the right to benefit from his own labor.
Human beings are the only living creatures on this planet bestowed with the gift of the sixth sense,the sense to know which is right and which is wrong.So when a person who can very well think on their own commits a crime deliberately ,he should not only be punished but deprived of his rights. A person who does not go by the law deserves none of his civil rights or benefits from his labor.
Such people have a very deleterious effect on the society. Only if he is deprived of his rights he will at least realize the importance of law . The law and order and civil rights are only for people who abide by the law and not for those who disrespect it.To err is human nature .Therefore if someone commits a crime by mistake he deserves a punishment and must be given a chance to repent.However one who does it deliberately need no such concessions i.e the chances to repent.Elsewhere this will bring a negative connotation of the law among the people and people will lose their respect for the law and start acting on whichever way they want. They deserve no benefits form their own labor too when they are capable of committing mistakes knowingly.
However everyone are equal before law ,whether they do mistakes knowingly or unknowingly. Everyone has their own rights and to be benefited from their own labor.
To conclude, In spite of everyone being equal before law ,a person who commits a crime knowingly is considered to have broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor to maintain peace and harmony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, at least, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63820224719 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6619855419 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395505617978 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.751428408 60.3974514979 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.769230769 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2307692308 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346704044778 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169598899057 0.0831039109588 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130044179066 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243643681228 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113782087396 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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