The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
The musician's real talent can be assessed only after his death because his composition should be appreciated by people who don't belong to his time. Because sometimes the musician's real talent cannot be found, owing to his fame ,which may be attributed to some other factors like his family being highly reputable.
For instance Beethoven's compositions are still lauded,whereas the compositions of other great musicians of his time are not.This is what real talent is.Fame tends to go down with us during our death but real talent sustains forever.
The real talent of a musician lies in the fact that people who does not belong to his time also credits his work.His compositions should be acceptable and lauded by people of all time.
On the other hand approbation of one's works always compounds his talent.So when a musician's talent is accurately assessed while he is alive helps him to improve his work which might result in far better works.
Thus the real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...her great musicians of his time are not.This is what real talent is.Fame tends to go...
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Suggestion: Fame
...ime are not.This is what real talent is.Fame tends to go down with us during our dea...
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...does not belong to his time also credits his work.His compositions should be acce...
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...long to his time also credits his work.His compositions should be acceptable and l...
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...me. On the other hand approbation of ones works always compounds his talent.So wh...
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... ones works always compounds his talent.So when a musicians talent is accurately a...
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... ones works always compounds his talent.So when a musicians talent is accurately assess...
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...s always compounds his talent.So when a musicians talent is accurately assessed while he ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...ch might result in far better works. Thus the real talent of a popular musician c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04017857143 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68466197446 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.844906339 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 161.285714286 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 5.21951772744 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531949258724 0.243740707755 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.331319011185 0.0831039109588 399% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.242182252788 0.0758088955206 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358609878457 0.150359130593 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252513880273 0.0667264976115 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 100.480337079 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.