A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Committing crime knowingly or unknowing is an offence. A crime shouldn't be committed knowingly.
Hence, a person who knowingly commits a crime has indeed broken the social contract and should be deprived of any civil rights or right to benefit from his/her own labor.
Every person living in this world is adhered by some rules called social contract. The rules include non impeachability of one's freedom. Committing a crime is against the law and it's against the social contract as well. Crime could be committed knowingly or it could be committed for varied reasons that could be justifiable. A girl who commits crime for self defence and if proven true would be considered a justifiable crime and wouldn't come under the category of purposeful crime. Whereas, the crime committed with vindictive attitude would be qualified as a purposeful crime.
Nonetheless, any crime is punishable under the law, that punishment differs when the justification provided seems reasonable.
Moreover, a person committing crime with cruel or purposeful intensions has broken the social contract to which he/she should have followed. Besides, not revocking the retainment of civil rights would expose this world to further consequences from that person.To exemplify the stated argument, a serial killer who committed a series of macabre, if left as a normal citizen in a country, wouldn't be afraid of performing those crimes in a repeated manner. This doesn't concern only to a person who is commits murder, suppose a smuggler with his normal civil rights woudn't be ashamed to do so after undergoing a punishment from law, say jail for 3 or 4 years.
However, with another point of view, depriving civil rights for a crime that is committed in a vindictive manner or purposefully, would beg the question of whether the person was given a chance to rectify. Before this imposement of ultimate punishment of depriving one from his/her own civil rights, a chance for rectification should be provided. If repeated crimes are commited with purposeful intentions then it would without question call into revokement of retaining one's civil rights.
Hence, a person who commits crime knowingly should be deprived of his/her civil rights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...il rights for a crime that is committed in a vindictive manner or purposefully, would beg the question...
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...e for rectification should be provided. If repeated crimes are commited with purpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83493871117 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49299719888 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2333089244 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370903374774 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143146903412 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115539004284 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229752022457 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144516468619 0.0667264976115 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.